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I've listed this article for peer review because I would some feedback before I take the list o WP:FL. The layout of the table is the main concern for me, could it be improved? should i just include first and last race instead of listing all the seasons the circuits have hosted a Grand Prix? All suggestions are welcome, thanks, NapHit (talk) 11:25, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Lead image is so small I can't make out the locations at all. I would suggest ditching or moving the Formula One navbox and increasing the image to the max allowable per MOS (300px I think?).
"and cars must" would prefer "vehicles" but I guess it's a matter of taste.
"Silverstone, since" think a semi-colon here.
" 22 kilometres (14 mi)" vs " 25.800 km (16.031 mi) " be consistent in the accuracy of the conversions.
" a safer and shorter" perhaps just "a shorter, safer .."
A couple of sentences have run-ons which would be better suited to either new sentences or semi-colons rather than commas.
"The most recent circuit to have hosted a Grand Prix was the Buddh International Circuit, which hosted the Indian Grand Prix in 2011" not true.
"become the latest circuit " the latest different circuit?
Put the Pescara Circuit into context, i.e. where it is and when the longest laps took place (i.e. which Grands Prix).
Length column, be consistent with accuracy, i.e. similar number of decimal places.
Not often do I see "United States of America", normally just United States.
I would reduce width of the Seasons column to give more space to the "Grands Prix" column which pretty much always spreads onto two lines.
Circuit Charade appears to be really called Charade Circuit.
Was the Indianapolis 500 part of the Grand Prix calendar some time? I think that's what you're implying. Add a note if so, tell me if I've got the wrong end of the stick.
"Spa-Francorchamps" ->"Circuit de Spa-Francorchamps"?
Proposed circuit table is unreferenced, and you could force the col widths to be the same as the preceding table (omitting the number of GPs col of course).
2010 Autocar external link seems superfluous.

The Rambling Man (talk) 11:19, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]