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Czech Republic national football team

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I've listed this article for peer review because I have done a little bit of work on this article recently, and I would appreciate other peoples views on what would be the ideal material to add to the article :)

Thanks, // Finns 08:25, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments from NapHit (talk · contribs)

• The lead needs to be alot longer, one sentence is not enough, try to include little bits from all the sections, and summarise the article  Done
• "while being part of Austria-Hungary," change while to whilst  Done
• "4-1" scorelines should use en dashes  Done
• Is there any reason why the Malta match is the only mentioned during the Euro 6 qualifying campaign?  Not done
  • Note - this is because this was the Czechs first competitive match - Netherlands are also mentioned // Finns 18:01, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
• "unprecedented success" bit POV I would change that
• "They did, however easily qualify for Euro 2000, winning all 10 of their group games, conceding just 5 goals. The team failed to produce at the finals though, producing just one win, and crashing out in the group stage." quite a few POV statements like "crashing out" easily qualify" these need to be rectified. Also 5 should be written out, this is a general for numbers that are not double digits or greater
• The history section in general is poor in my opinion and needs to be greatly expanded I would look at Croatia national football team for ideas on this.
• There are no references either which should be added for anything that can be contested, i.e. qualifying easily for euro 2000
• The tournament records section could do with being split into Euro and world cup and needs a few sentences to introduce the relevant tables
• A statistics section would be helpful, as would a record section
• Supporters and media section as well would be handy

Overall a lot of improvement is needed to this article good luck NapHit (talk) 16:50, 26 August 2008 (UTC)

If you want an idea of what I mean look at Croatia national football team for ideas on the structure and sections you should have NapHit (talk) 21:15, 28 August 2008 (UTC)