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Robert Duvall filmography

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Nominator(s): LADY LOTUS • TALK 17:47, 11 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it is a well sourced and complete list of Robert Duvall's film and television work. LADY LOTUS • TALK 17:47, 11 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:51, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
*"since he first appeared in an episode of Armstrong Circle Theater" - our article on this show spells the last word the correct British way - which is correct?
    • Lol done ;)
  • "His television work during the 1960's" - no need for apostrophe in 1960s (in a couple of places)
    • Done, I literally never know which way to do it lol
  • "He then was cast" - while not technically wrong, I think "He was then cast" reads a bit better
    • Done
  • "In the 2000's" - as before
    • Done
  • "where he played Judge Joseph Palmer, and Downey's father" - are these two separate characters or the same person?
    • Comment: Same character, is there a better way to write it?
      • I'd suggest "he co-starred with Robert Downey Jr. in the legal drama film The Judge where he played Judge Joseph Palmer, the father of Downey's character" -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:27, 16 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "who he co-starred with" => "with whom he co-starred"
    • Done
  • If you sort the film table in chronological order, the two TBA entries go first. They should go last.
    • Comment: I'm not sure I've ever had to do that - mind pointing me in the right direction of how to do that? :D
  • As it's a sortable table, any role which appears more than once and is linked needs to be linked every time (Tom Hagen is one I spotted, might be the only one)
    • Done
  • Roles beginning with The should sort on the next word as with film titles
    • Comment: This should have already been done prior to nomination so let me know if there are any I missed :)
      • All roles starting with The ("The Apostle" etc) sort under T...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:07, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
        • My bad, I misread that as titles :

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

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  • Tables need captions, which allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables without having to read out all of the text before it each time. Visual captions can be added by putting |+ caption_text as the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting |+ {{sronly|caption_text}} instead.
  • Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. --PresN 00:53, 21 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
User:PresN - Great recommendation, see the latest change for the addition of screen reader caption to the 2 tables. Let me know if that wasn't what you meant lol Thanks for the review! LADY LOTUS • TALK 15:07, 21 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Kavyansh

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Placeholder Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:43, 2 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • "American actor, director and producer" — If the article is in American English, I'll suggest using Oxford comma after 'director'
  • "as General Dwight D. Eisenhower" — pipe 'General' out of the link
  • "in the epic Western adventure" — avoid linking multiple adjacent words
  • "in MASH (1970)" should be "M*A*S*H (1970)"
  • "Dr. John H. Watson" — just "Dr. Watson" would suffice
  • "In 1983, he was cast" — at start of every paragraph, replace 'he' or other pronouns with 'Duvall'
  • "Western" and "Christian Bale" are linked multiple times in the lead.

– Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:52, 2 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Pseud 14

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  • Great work on the coverage of this article! My only comment is that in the film section, if the films are still in production/filming a legend needs to be added to denote these have not yet been released. (see e.g. Matt Damon filmography). That applies to the last 3 films in the table. Pseud 14 (talk) 15:58, 11 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 14:06, 16 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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