Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Premio Lo Nuestro 2014/archive1

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The list was promoted by Giants2008 02:13, 22 April 2015 [1].

Premio Lo Nuestro 2014 edit

Featured list candidates/Premio Lo Nuestro 2014/archive1

Nominator(s): Javier Espinoza (talk) 19:52, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I have been researching the Lo Nuestro Awards history and I think this list meets the criteria. This list is based on several FLs, mostly the 84th Academy Awards and Premio Lo Nuestro 2013. I will be watching closely this nomination, to follow your comments. Thank you. Javier Espinoza (talk) 19:52, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support A very well-written list based on prose. Although the table is formatted properly, the empty space seems quite annoying to me and I do know that you have categorized. Can something be done to it? --FrankBoy _(Buzz) 21:56, 28 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the support. Javier Espinoza (talk) 23:36, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support from jona ^(talk) 18:38, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

*Comments: Please provide context to the uniformed reader, who is Antonio Guzmán? You said who was Jenni Rivera but what about Tito El Bambino, Olga Tañón, Gerardo Ortíz, and Pitbull? The lead says "the telecast garnered more than 9.5 million viewers" but the article says "drew in an average 9.5 million people during its three hours of length" which is contradicting. There's overlinking problems in the article (Pitbull, Daddy Yankee, Marc Anthony, are linked twice). I also did some minor c/e on the article, feel free to revert if any are feared worse over the former. Best, jona ^(talk) 16:30, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank your for the comments, I did some changes in the lead, but I did not find more info about Guzmán, he produced several award shows in United States, but the imdb ref is all that I could find. Javier Espinoza (talk) 23:36, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No problem. There's still an overlinking problem (in the musical performers section), also you didn't need to provide a source for who Guzman was (especially one from Amazon/IMDB) the concern was in the lead and not the infobox. Best, jona ^(talk) 00:50, 3 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed (the overlinking). Thanks. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:58, 3 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed it. I still don't know who Antonio Guzman is, you've told us who everybody else is (in the lead) but have yet identified those who are unfamiliar with the topic on who he is. Best, jona ^(talk) 23:17, 3 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I removed Guzman from the lead. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:48, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 18:27, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Too any clauses in the opening sentence.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"four accolades and the Excellence Award" so five awards. And why is the non-linked Excellence Award singled out here?

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"for quiet a while" typo.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Why the blanks in the table, surely it'd be simple to reorganise the table so there aren't such gaping holes or even worst case span the cell across both columns.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Image captions which are complete sentences need to end with a full stop.
Is there a real need to overlink the individuals nominated and awarded in the table, it's not sortable after all...

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Our article on Grupo Montez de Durango doesn't have an accent on the Montez.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No good reason not to combine the presenters within the awards section. If you don't, be consistent with linking, e.g. why isn't "Regional Mexican Song" linked?

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

How is "Category" supposed to sort? I can't work it out at all.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Altair Jarabo " should have an accent on the i.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"a medley "Cuánto Te Debo"/"Acá Entre Nos"" word missing, perhaps "a medley of..."

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

What is bachata?

Fixed, added link to bachata. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"performer ... performed". Poor prose.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"presented his songs" do you mean he sung them?

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No idea of the point of the "Role" column in this table.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"18-34 " etc, en-dash required.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Check reference titles for en-dash violations also.

Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 17:21, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 12:03, 6 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support All issues have seems to have been resolved. Great work! Erick (talk) 21:18, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments: Per WP:COLLAPSE, there's no need to hide the presenters and performers since they are an integral part of the broadcast. Also, the winners and nominees should look like the ones at the Oscars (see 86th Academy Awards for example) due accessibility issues.

--Birdienest81 (talk) 08:07, 18 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed, thanks for your comments Birdienest81, your work for the Academy Awards inspired me to arrange the list this way. Thanks again. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:18, 21 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 02:46, 22 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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