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The list was promoted by Giants2008 21:06, 30 November 2012 [1].

List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Saqlain Mushtaq edit

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Nominator(s): Zia Khan 11:42, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it covers the topic entirely and I believe it is according to the FL criteria. As always, looking forward for comments and suggestions. Cheers, Zia Khan 11:42, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from TBrandley (talk) 23:04, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Any lede image?
    • No image available at Commons, sorry.
  • "This is regarded as a notable achievement" by who?
    • Done.
  • "Ref" missing dot period
    • Column merged into "Result" column.
  • Just a suggestion, but I would align references in the table to the center

Very nice, mostly solid. TBrandley 17:50, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Harrias
;Comments from Harrias talk
  • "In January 1999, he took his first pair of five-wicket hauls in a single match against India at the M.A. Chidambaram Stadium, Chennai. By the end of his career, he had claimed five-wickets hauls in both innings of a match twice." I would consider rephrasing both these sentences, thus: "In January 1999 against India at the M.A. Chidambaram Stadium, Chennai, he took a five-wicket haul in both innings of a Test match for the first time. He repeated this feat only once more in his career, at Feroz Shah Kotla Ground, Delhi during the second Test of the same series."
  • I'm not particularly happy with the way that "Runs" sorts, if I wanted to know the most runs he'd conceded when he'd got five wickets, this sorting wouldn't be useful. However, I know it is consistent with the other promoted lists.
    • Not sure what can I do here? Zia Khan 16:04, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
      • No need to do anything. I was just noting my dissatisfaction, I appreciate that this is the convention. Harrias talk 16:38, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref #12: "2st Test" needs fixing.
  • Ref #18: you use a different date format to elsewhere.

Other than these minor issues, it's pretty good: you've done plenty of these now, so you know what you're doing. Decent work, well done. Harrias talk 14:22, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from —Vensatry (Ping me) 15:12, 25 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Ref #3 is a rd, use the actual link
  • Done.
  • Sentences that start with "In ...", prose looks weak
  • Harrias suggested these two setences, see his comment above.
  • The succeeding sentence needs a small re-write. Not sure why you're so keen on including the venues every time
  • As above.
  • Link Hat-trick appropriately, else "one of the four bowlers to achieve an ODI hat-trick" to "List of One Day International cricket hat-tricks"
  • Done.
  • "on two or more different ocassions" -> on more than two different occasions
  • I disagree, only one bowlar has taken more than two hat-tricks. The others did the same twice.
  • Ocassion is a typo
  • Done.
  • Try to merge "One of his hat-tricks came during the 1999 Cricket World Cup" with the previous sentence in some way
  • Done.
  • the Pakistan
  • Removed.
  • His last ODI fifer came in the first innings
  • Fixed.
  • While sorting the Test table by "Date" there is a problem with two Test matches where he took ten-wicket hauls

—Vensatry (Ping me) 19:23, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 16:02, 29 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
  • "Saqlain was named by the Wisden as one of their Cricketers of the Year in 2000." Remove "the".
  • In the Result column of the key, "the" should be removed before Pakistan.
  • Maybe this is just my eyes, but I think the five stat rows in the middle of the tables would look better centered.
  • Minor, but in the note there should be a comma after Malinga. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:32, 24 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fixed all. Since all the rows are aligned to left so this should be to the left, for consistency. Zia Khan 04:37, 25 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 10:30, 28 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • " as one of their Cricketers of the Year " don't include "one of" in the link
  • Test 12, economy claims 1.10 but he conceded 35 runs in 16.4 overs, so the maths doesn't work for me... probably 2.1? Suggest you just check the others.

The Rambling Man (talk) 17:49, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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