Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Scarlett Johansson/archive1

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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 15 June 2020 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of awards and nominations received by Scarlett Johansson edit

Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Scarlett Johansson/archive1

Nominator(s): ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk and 186.21.15.202 (talk) 17:13, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Scarlett Johansson is an American actress. Her films have grossed over $14.3 billion worldwide, making Johansson the ninth-highest-grossing box office star of all time. She has various awards for her performance. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 17:13, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:06, 1 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

;Comments on the lead

"she has been nominated for two Academy Awards, two British Academy Film Awards." => "she has been nominated for two Academy Awards and two British Academy Film Awards."
"For, Johansson's first leading role" - no reason for that comma
"earned her the BAFTA Award for Best Actress in a Leading Role,[3] Boston Society of Film Critics Award for Best Actress,[4] and she was nominated" => "earned her the BAFTA Award for Best Actress in a Leading Role,[3] and the Boston Society of Film Critics Award for Best Actress,[4] and she was nominated"
"In 2003, she starred in UK Film Council's " => "In 2003, she starred in the UK Film Council's "
"Los Angeles Film Critics Association Award for New Generation Award" - pretty sure the word Award should not be in here twice
"which won Tony Award for Best Featured Actress in a Play, Theatre World Award" => "for which she won the Tony Award for Best Featured Actress in a Play and the Theatre World Award" (it wasn't the play which won)
"and she was nominated for the Drama Desk Award" => "and was nominated for the Drama Desk Award"
"Since 2010, Scarlett Johansson" - no need to restate her entire name, just use her surname
"has received one People's Choice Awards" => "has received one People's Choice Award"
No need for either of the commas in that sentence
"she was nominated for Academy Award for Best Actress" => "she was nominated for the Academy Award for Best Actress"
"The same year, Johansson appeared in Taika Waititi's comedy-drama Jojo Rabbit (2019)" - you already said it was the same year, so no need to state (2019) at the end of the sentence.
Think that's it on the lead, will look at the rest later...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:50, 1 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: I have fixed the issues raised above. Thank you for the comments. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 11:43, 1 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Further comments

"(shared with Joaquin Phoenix for the OS sex scene)" - what does this mean? What is an OS sex scene? The only OS I know is the Ordnance Survey :-)
"Outstanding Performers of the Year Award (with Adam Driver" - missing closing bracket
Think that's it -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:22, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ChrisTheDude, What I meant was an on-screen sex scene

. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 18:59, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think the words "on screen" are needed. If it happened in a film then it's obviously on screen......? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:03, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: fixed. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 19:05, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:13, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Comment I just want to note that something occurring in a film does not always mean it's on screen. Offscreen actions can also occur, and can be rather commonplace in film. Sometimes the genre's conventions can be a reason for this. Soulbust (talk) 08:44, 6 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- That's true, but I still don't think it's necessary to specifically state that an award was given for something that occurred "on screen", as that's pretty much a given. If an award was presented specifically for something that occurred offscreen then I can understand mentioning that, because it would be quite unusual, but I don't think the reverse is true....... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:42, 6 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Support Not much else needed, perhaps a "See Also" link to the FL Scarlett Johansson on screen and stage, but that's just my personal preference. ~ HAL 333 05:18, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47 edit

I have two comments for the lead image caption. I would remove "speaking" to just say "Scarlett Johansson at the..." and the "in San Diego, California" part seems unnecessary to me since the city's name is already in the event's title.
British Academy Film Award should not be linked twice in the first paragraph.

Overall, wonderful work with the list. Once my relatively nitpick-y comments are addressed, I will support this. Aoba47 (talk) 19:52, 1 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Aoba47. I have made the changes. Again, Thank you! ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 20:01, 1 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for addressing everything. I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 20:58, 1 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 18:16, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review –

~~About.com (ref 70) isn't considered reliable for much of anything, much less an FL. Surely there's something stronger than this available?~~
~~All caps in the title of ref 82 should be removed.~~
~~Publishers are needed for refs 109 and 115.~~
Those were the only issues I detected, and the link-checker doesn't show any problems with the links. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:28, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Giants2008, Done. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 15:36, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The About.com reference has been replaced with a more reliable source and the formatting issues have been resolved. All of my concerns regarding the sourcing have been addressed, so I think the source review has been passed. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:12, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Giants2008, Thanks for the review. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 11:05, 7 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 18:20, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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