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List of awards and nominations received by Joaquin Phoenix edit

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Nominator(s): ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 14:57, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Joaquin Phoenix is an American actor who has received various awards and nominations, including one Academy Award. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 14:57, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:50, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • "Phoenix's breakthrough role in the critically acclaimed Ridley Scott's epic historical action-drama" - words are not in the right order, it should be "Phoenix's breakthrough role in Ridley Scott's critically-acclaimed epic historical action-drama"
  • No need for comma after the title of that film
  • "where he played as the American singer" => "where he played the American singer"
  • "where he plays as a World War II Navy veteran" - again, the word "as" is not needed
  • "In 2013, Phoenix starred in romantic science-fiction drama Her, he received widespread critical acclaim for his performance" => "In 2013, Phoenix starred in romantic science-fiction drama Her, and received widespread critical acclaim for his performance"
  • Might be worth also mentioning You Were Never Really Here in the lead, as he won 11 acting awards, as many as he did for Gladiator
  • "Best Actor (tied with Adam Driver for Marriage Story)" - film title should be in italics
  • Should mention that for the roles for which he won the awards in 1984 and 1990, he acted under the name Leaf Phoenix
  • Think that's it from me, great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:55, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ~ HAL333([2]) 12:35, 15 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Instead of Walk the Line, where, Walk the Line, in which may be more appropriate.
  • Same thing with psychological drama The Master, where
  • To be a little repetitive you could change the "plays" in he plays a World War II Navy veteran to "portrays".
  • In the sentence In 2013, Phoenix starred in romantic science-fiction drama Her, and received widespread critical acclaim for his performance., the comma after "Her" is not needed. You could remove it, add "he" afterwards, or maybe change it to something like for which he received widespread...

Otherwise great work again. =) ~ HAL333([3]) 21:16, 14 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Happy to Support this nomination. ~ HAL333([4]) 12:35, 15 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – Pass
Resolved comments from RunningTiger123 (talk) 14:26, 21 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Here are the key issues that need to be changed.
  • Sources 28-30, 50, 83, 102, and 108 need to be updated; they only list him as a nominee, not the winner.
  • Sources 32, 90, 94, 113, and 122 do not mention Phoenix.
  • Source 38 is by The Austin Chronicle, not the Austin Film Critics Association, and it should have an author and publication date.
  • Source 58 is by WDIV-TV, not the Detroit Film Critics Society, and it should have an author and publication date.
  • Sources 75 and 88 do not specify placement, so those rows should use "Nominated" instead.
  • Source 105 seems sketchy – it says it's pulling its information from IMDb, which is not a reliable source.
  • Source 114 does not name Phoenix. I know he's in the scene that is being nominated, but I'm not sure if making that connection constitutes OR.
  • Source 116 does not state if Phoenix received the award for a specific movie.
  • Source 117 does not mention Phoenix receiving a nomination.
  • Source 119 says the TIFF Tribute Actor Award is a career honor, not an award for a specific film (i.e. Joker).

In addition, the following items are formatting issues I noticed. They're not urgent or entirely necessary, but if you have time, I'd look into cleaning them up.

  • Source 1 needs a date.
  • Sources 3 and 4 should probably use Young Artist Awards instead of YoungArtistAwards.
  • Sources 41, 45, 49, 76, 81, 82, 86, 87, 88, 89, 95, 99, 109, and 117 could include authors.
  • For consistency, change source 46 to use RogerEbert.com like source 44.
  • Remove format for source 48.
  • Sources 59 and 74 should have authors and publication dates.
  • Source 61 should have an author and website name.
  • The archived link for source 67 is incorrect.
  • The author of source 70 is Ryan Adams, not Ryan Adam.
  • For consistency, use last and first parameters for source 73.
  • The information in source 93 seems to describe a different article than what is linked.
  • Source 97 should have a publication date.
  • Source 104 doesn't need to name the International Press Academy twice.
  • As a general note from my personal experience with similar lists, generally |publisher= is used for web sources that come from awards organizations directly, while |work= or |website= are used for citations that come from magazines, outside websites, etc. Let me clarify with some examples – source 8 is from the Hollywood Foreign Press Association, which is the awarding organization, so it should use |publisher=. On the other hand, source 5 is from E!, which is an outside source, so it should use |work= or |website=.

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:35, 20 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Other notes
  • Wikilink Golden Globe Award for Best Actor – Motion Picture Drama in lead
  • Remove commas before sources 5, 16, and 25
  • Change Phoenix appeared in biographical drama to Phoenix appeared in the biographical drama
  • Change Her and he received widespread critical acclaim to Her and received widespread critical acclaim (or add a comma to make it a proper compound sentence)
  • Change he appeared in psychological thriller to he appeared in the psychological thriller
  • Many awards are not in alphabetical order; I would list all of them, but there's too many to do that easily.
  • For consistency, I think you should put "Awards" after each group – so, for example, it would say Australian Academy of Cinema and Television Arts Awards instead of just Australian Academy of Cinema and Television Arts.
  • You could list his 2005 nomination from the DFWFCA as 4th place if you wanted.

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:35, 20 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, and I am now happy to support this nomination. RunningTiger123 (talk) 14:26, 21 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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