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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 23:32, 19 January 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of accolades received by The Danish Girl (film) edit

Featured list candidates/List of accolades received by The Danish Girl (film)/archive1

Nominator(s): Cowlibob (talk) 19:04, 7 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The Danish Girl was a 2015 film which was lauded for the performances of Alicia Vikander and Eddie Redmayne. It received several accolades which are listed here. As always look forward to all the helpful comments on how to improve it. Cowlibob (talk) 19:04, 7 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Mymis

In the introduction, you talk very little about the awards that the film received. Only one third of the introduction is devoted to the summary of awards. You could mention the Oscar nominations, something about Critics' Choice Movie Awards and more bout SAGs etc etc.
I'd suggest archiving more links especially for websites for awards shows as they become broken very often. And for refs that are already archived, accessdates probably not necessary anymore.
Ref number 8 missing date.
Ref number 38 missing author.
Ref number 37 missing accessdate. Better to archive it as well.
No need for comma in note a. as you list only two things, same with f.

Mymis (talk) 22:57, 9 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Mymis: Thanks for your comments. I've expanded the lead to have more award content. Have also hopefully dealt with the other comments. Cowlibob (talk) 18:12, 11 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

You have my support. Great work! Mymis (talk) 23:27, 8 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Yashthepunisher

"British-American biographic film", or "biographical film"?
You can mention its genre in the opening sentence
Full stop missing from the alt text.

Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:53, 10 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Yashthepunisher: Thanks for your comments. Have hopefully sorted them. Cowlibob (talk) 18:13, 11 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Great work! Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:49, 12 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 12:54, 16 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Not sure how 9th or 10th place could be considered a "win".
Especially when 3rd and 4th places are tagged as "nominations".
Messes with the sorting too...
"Golden Globes Awards" or "Golden Globe Awards"?
Notes are sentence fragments so don't need full stops.

The Rambling Man (talk) 10:45, 12 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Sorry for the late reply here. Have fixed above. I think it's "Golden Globe Awards". Cowlibob (talk) 19:02, 22 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support my concerns addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:54, 16 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, source review with spotchecks passed. Promoting. --Pres N 22:37, 19 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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