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List of accolades received by Devdas (2002 Hindi film)

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Nominator(s): Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:42, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This is the list of accolades received by 2002 Hindi film Devdas. The film got so many attentions from both Indian and foreign journalists, and it was Indian submission for the Oscar. I nominated it because I believe this list is comprehensive enough. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:42, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:44, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Lead photo caption needs a full stop
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:40, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:40, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "while Kirron Kher, Smita Jaykar and Vijayendra Ghatge playing...." - "while playing" doesn't work grammatically. It should be either "with....playing" or "while....played"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:40, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a Bachelor of Law student who later being an alcoholic after his family rejected" => "a Bachelor of Law student who later becomes an alcoholic after his family rejects"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:40, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "who also wrote the dialogues" => "who also wrote the dialogue"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:40, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the receipient(s) column, anything that starts with a " should sort based on the first actual word, so "Dola Re Dola" should sort under D, not at the top
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:40, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any reason why the result column is not sortable, as is the norm?
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:40, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Note b is not a complete sentence so shouldn't have a full stop.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:40, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Table accessibility review (MOS:DTAB): Tthe table is missing a caption.

  • Please add `|+ table caption` to the top of the table, or if it would duplicate a nearby section header you can visually hide the caption as `|+ {{sronly|table caption}}`
--PresN 14:26, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:08, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Yash
  • Devdas is a 2002 Hindi-language --> Devdas is a 2002 Indian Hindi-language
  • "and Vijayendra Ghatge played supporting roles." 'Played' supporting role or 'play' supporting roles? The entire article is in present except for this bit.
  • Write full names in the alt text

Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:17, 13 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 13:44, 13 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:50, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:51, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Use {{sronly}} for the table caption, since it is similar to the section heading and therefore unnecessary to display.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:51, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Aishwarya Rai Bachchan should sort by "Rai Bachchan" in the table
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:51, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "15–17 May 2003" does not sort correctly in the date column (I think the dash prevents Wikipedia from recognizing it as a date to sort correctly)
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:51, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • No need to use small text to state "(for ...)" in nominee column (see MOS:SMALL)
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:51, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Should the Bollywood Music Award for "Best Songs" be for "Best Song" instead?
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:51, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sources 11, 22, and 33 seem unnecessary; there is no clear way to access the primary sources for verifiability. I would suggest removing these sources, especially since other sources seem to exist.
    • Source 33 is a bit different, since it is the only source for those awards. You'll need a different source here so the awards can be verified; otherwise, the awards should probably be removed.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:51, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source 26 is titled "'Devdas' wins eight awards", yet only five wins are shown – why?
I don't know... Every articles on Google say eight, but they only show five, I have no idea to solve this problem. Sorry. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:51, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm... I guess it's okay for now, but I'd encourage you to keep digging and look for it. RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:50, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 15:30, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support – all issues resolved! RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:50, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Three of the awards bodies have no Wikipedia articles, which would imply they are not notable. Why, then, should we be listing their awards here?
Removed. But, in the future, I will re-added the awards when I have created Wikipedia articles for them. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:39, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • " ₹500 million" link INR.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:45, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the 4th iteration of" fourth.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:45, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the film garnered eighteen nominations," infobox says 17 noms.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:45, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Saroj Khan (for "Dola Re Dola")" why is the text smaller here?
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:45, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 14 should link The Guardian following your linking approach to do so first time each time.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:45, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any reason why Ref 16 suddenly has a publisher?
It's agency actually...
  • Ref 24 has stylistically unmatched apostrophes.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:45, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 32 also suddenly adds a publisher.
This too...

That's it for a quick review. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 17:49, 29 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 03:47, 20 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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