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List of Olympic men's ice hockey players for Poland

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Nominator(s): Kaiser matias (talk) 00:58, 25 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Based on similar lists for Canada, Switzerland, and the United States, this looks at the various Olympic ice hockey players from Poland. Its been a while since I've nominated a Featured List (or at least a successful one), so any advice on how to get the article to that level would be much appreciated. Kaiser matias (talk) 00:58, 25 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments
    • "and permanently added to the Winter Olympic Games in 1924." - what happened in 1924 to mean that the sport was "permanently" added (bearing in mind it had already been added four years earlier)? Whatever the answer, it could do with a source.....
Reworded, but will have to add a source in a few days, as I'm not able to cite something useful at the moment.
Found a citation for this. Kaiser matias (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Hilary Skarżyński has scored the most goals, 9," - the use of "comma, number" looks weird, and the usage right at the end of the same sentence looks even weirder. I would change it to "the most goals, with 9" and so on (which I note you have already done in some other cases)
Changed
    • I don't know much about ice hockey, but is a negative GAA possible, or is this a typo? If it is correct, the figure of -4.5 should sort as being lower than all the other values (currently it sorts in the middle).
Typo, fixed
    • The Toronto Star ref needs a retrieval date
Changed it to one that can be linked and viewed, and included an access date.
    • For the IIHF refs, I would show the publisher as International Ice Hockey Federation (as in fact you have done in one case) rather than showing IIHF.com as the work. Similarly Olimpijski.pl is (I think) the official site of the Polish Olympic Committee, so I would list that body as the publisher.
Done. And should note I've formatted all the references to use the "harvnb" template for consistency (I meant to do that prior to nominating; slipped my mind).
    • Does Podnieks 2010 not have an ISBN?
Unfortunately not.
Not a problem if it hasn't, I just wanted to check that it hadn't been accidentally omitted -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:02, 31 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Addressed everything here. Kaiser matias (talk) 22:32, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: I found a citation for that last issue above. Kaiser matias (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments by Allied45
  • There is no ALTTEXT for the image in the lead
  • It appears the definition for IIHFHOF should be "International Ice Hockey Federation Hall of Fame" instead of "International Ice Hockey Hall of Fame"
  • The "Tournaments" column in the skaters table should be "Tournament(s)" for consistency
  • I feel "Team Captain" notes in the table should not be all caps, "Team captain" would suffice

That's all that jumped out at me :) Allied45 (talk) 23:59, 8 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Allied45: Thanks for looking it over. Will get to it shortly. Kaiser matias (talk) 00:50, 9 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Allied45: Got through everything here. Let me know if there's anything else. Kaiser matias (talk) 20:46, 10 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support – all my concerns have been rectified, great list! Allied45 (talk) 23:13, 10 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments by NatureBoyMD
  • The caption in the first image is not a complete sentence. Remove the period or reword.
Reworded
  • In the image captions for Roman Sabiński and Wojciech Tkacz, link the Olympics they played in as is done in all the other captions.
Done
  • Add a comma after "Since 1992" in the second paragraph.
Done
  • Goltenders table: Use a sort key on Paweł Łukaszka (ex: {{sortname|Paweł|Łukaszka||Lukaszka, Pawel}}) so he sorts properly; the "Ł" throws things off.
Done
  • Skaters table: The same sorting needs to be applied to: Feliks Góralczyk, Robert Góralczyk, Andrzej Jańczy, Andrzej Kądziołka, Władysław Król, Andrzej Małysiak, Dariusz Płatek, Andrzej Słowakiewicz, Józef Słowakiewicz, Aleksander Słuczanowski, Andrzej Świątek, Tadeusz Świcarz, Andrzej Świstak, Kazimierz Żebrowski, Andrzej Żurawski, and Karol Żurek. There might be a few more. I copied the default table order, pasted it into a spreadsheet, sorted the article's table alphabetically, copied, pasted, and compared. Any last names with the first (and sometimes second or third) non-standard characters need sort keys.
Done
  • "It's a big world out there", the title of the first reference should be in title case to match the others that follow it: ("It's a Big World out There").
Done

Everything else looks fine. NatureBoyMD (talk) 23:58, 23 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@NatureBoyMD: Sorry for the delay, but addressed everything here. Thanks for pointing out the sorting issue, I would have had no idea about it otherwise, or how to fix it. Kaiser matias (talk) 01:10, 27 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Kaiser matias: I found one more skater in need of a sort key: Maksymilian Więcek. (I, too, was thoroughly confused the first time I encountered that issue myself.) Everything else looks fine. NatureBoyMD (talk) 04:14, 27 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks fixed that one. Kaiser matias (talk) 05:11, 27 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 20:09, 27 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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