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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:27, 29 January 2022 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Formula One Grand Prix wins by Lewis Hamilton edit

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Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lewis Hamilton is a British racing driver who was won seven Formula One World Drivers' Championship and a record 103 Grand Prix victories. Last year, Hamilton broke Michael Schumacher's all-time record of 91 race victories and earlier this year became the first driver to reach 100 Grand Prix wins. I believe that the list complies with the featured list criteria and submit this list for all constructive criticism. MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Image review — Pass edit

All the images are suitably licenced, and have appropriate ALT text. Pass for image review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 13:19, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'm leaning toward oppose per criterion 3c. If we have List of career achievements by Lewis Hamilton, why does this need to be a separate article? Most of the content (team, chassis, engine, race, season, placement) is also at Formula_One_career_of_Lewis_Hamilton#Results. Reywas92Talk 14:14, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support by NapHit edit

  • "becoming at 23 years and 300 days the youngest driver..." needs to be a comma after becoming and days
  • "unable to regain his championship-winning performances..." regain feels like the wrong word here. Match perhaps?
  • "Hamilton has so far accumulated 103 Grand Prix victories..." think so far is redundant here (from the chart image caption)
  • "...after winning the 2019 Hungarian Grand Prix, where he holds a record 8 victories" would change the last bit to 'where he was won a record 8 times'

That's it from me. NapHit (talk) 12:40, 24 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to support now my issues have been addressed. NapHit (talk) 21:44, 26 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from ChrisTheDude edit

  • "Hamilton achieved a further three victories that season,[3] making him the second rookie after Jacques Villeneuve to be World Drivers' Championship runner-up and equalled" - comma needed after runner-up
  • There's a couple of uses of "claiming victory", I wonder if this needs rewording? It reads a bit like there was uncertainty over who won and he went "It was me! It was me!" Does that make sense......?
  • "Hamilton has won at a record 31 out of 37 different Grands Prix he has competed in" => "Hamilton has won at a record 31 out of 37 different Grands Prix in which he has competed"
  • "Hamilton has won at a record 31 out of 36 different circuits he has driven at" => "Hamilton has won at a record 31 out of 36 different circuits at which he has driven"
  • "the five race tracks where Hamilton has driven on" => "the five race tracks where Hamilton has driven"
  • Same sentence: "and not achieved a Grand Prix victory at" => "and not achieved a Grand Prix victory"
  • That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:49, 29 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:24, 30 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Kavyansh edit

  • @MWright96, my views about this list is bit similar to @Reywas92. Your thoughts? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 19:36, 8 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Kavyansh Singh I believe the list complies with WP:NLIST as well as WP:GNG and I think that having put in the aforementioned list might cause that list to become bloated a little bit MWright96 (talk) 21:54, 8 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
      • I'll try to give it a full review soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:52, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
        • I agree with MWright96 that if we moved this list to the career achievements one, it would be too big. I think a solution is to remove a list of wins from that article and link to this one with a brief description of his record etc. There's a well-established convention for these lists, so I don't think 3c applies, as it's not derivative and wins is one part of his career achievements. NapHit (talk) 16:55, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
          • Yeah, I just wanted to know the nominator's thoughts. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:33, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Full review:

  • "Hamilton achieved a further three victories that season" — should be "Hamilton further achieved three victories that season"
  • "and former childhood friend Nico Rosberg," — that means during the time of incident/collision, they were not 'childhood friend[s]'?
  • "are the six races he has entered and not won" — 'not won' can be replaced by 'lost'?

That is it. Nice one! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:33, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, except for one misuse of |format to add extra links to the "next" pages of a paginated results url. Fixed; promoting. --PresN 02:42, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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