Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of FIFA Women's World Cup finals/archive1
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 5 April 2024 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of FIFA Women's World Cup finals edit
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The Women's World Cup wrapped up a few months ago, but I've had my eye on improving this list for a while and decided to dedicate an evening to doing just that tonight after watching the W Gold Cup. The list's existing elements were all preserved while a substantial amount of prose with good citations was added; most of it was modeled after the list of men's finals, a relatively ancient FL, with some modern tweaks. (This is my second concurrent nomination, but my first has three supports.) SounderBruce 06:05, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- MPGuy2824's comments
- "continental competitions alongside the hosts, who have an automatic berth" to "continental competitions, alongside the hosts who have an automatic berth"
- Fixed.
- "the two remaining teams beyond the semifinal round" can be simplified to "the two winning/successful teams of the semifinal round, "
- Reworded to use "advanced from the semifinal round".
- " The hosted by Australia and New Zealand in 2023" - a word got eaten somewhere.
- Fixed.
- See if you want make the country name into a header cell in each row. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 07:39, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Hey man im josh
Source review: Passed
- Reliable enough for the information being cited
- Consistent date formatting
- Consistent and proper reference formatting
- Ref 14, 17, and 20 – Needs url-access parameter specified, as when I visit the links I'm being told I need a subscription to view them.
- Appropriate wikilinks where applicable
- Spot checks on 8 sources match what they are being cited for
Other comments:
- This could do with a run of iabot
- Will do so once a few of the sources are archived by the Wayback Machine.
- Missing row scopes in the results by nation table.
- Fixed.
- They key calls out "Match was decided during extra time", but this isn't used anywhere in the list.
- Hidden until needed.
- Caption for the 2023 final image could use a period at the end.
- Added.
That's all I've got, good stuff as always SounderBruce! Hey man im josh (talk) 17:52, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Hey man im josh: Thanks for the comments. I have addressed all of the issues that were pointed out. SounderBruce 01:28, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Good stuff, support! Hey man im josh (talk) 12:03, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments edit
- "it was retroactively given the World Cup moniker" - maybe say what it was actually billed as at the time?
- Added the name, which is quite silly.
- "The United States are the most successful team [...] Germany has two titles" - one is plural but the other singular?
- Moved USWNT to singular.
- "The most recent final, hosted by Australia and New Zealand in 2023" - both nations didn't host the final
- Fixed by moving the final's article to the bit after the semicolon.
- "The original FIFA Women's World Cup Trophy is used for the final match" - how is it "used" for the final if it isn't presented to the winning team? Is it just displayed at the stadium or something?
- Added that it is awarded but otherwise kept at the museum.
- So, to clarify, the winning team gets two trophies? Currently the article says "The team that wins the final receives the FIFA Women's World Cup Winner's Trophy, which is engraved with the winning team's names. The original FIFA Women's World Cup Trophy, awarded to the winning team", which makes it sound like two different trophies with (slightly) different names are involved, but both those links redirect to the same place and I couldn't figure out the answer from that section. If it's indeed correct that they get two trophies, then I would change "awarded" to "which is also presented" in the second sentence -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:33, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: There are two trophies; I have rewritten the section to hopefully make it a bit more clear. FIFA keeps the original, and a replica is given to the winner (presumably through the federation). SounderBruce 08:43, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- So, to clarify, the winning team gets two trophies? Currently the article says "The team that wins the final receives the FIFA Women's World Cup Winner's Trophy, which is engraved with the winning team's names. The original FIFA Women's World Cup Trophy, awarded to the winning team", which makes it sound like two different trophies with (slightly) different names are involved, but both those links redirect to the same place and I couldn't figure out the answer from that section. If it's indeed correct that they get two trophies, then I would change "awarded" to "which is also presented" in the second sentence -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:33, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Added that it is awarded but otherwise kept at the museum.
- Think that's all I got, great work as ever SB! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:18, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Thanks for the review! I didn't see this one initially in my watchlist, but have finished the changes before I head out on a road trip. SounderBruce 08:07, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:50, 15 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 01:45, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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