ivi article

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I can see you having issues with this article, which is otherwise well written and to my rather quick review fairly written, because most of your sources are very blog-like. Of course, where else do you get information about such a topic. But like you say, why invest too much time and effort only to have your work dismissed. Because of this source issue with an otherwise interesting and decent article, if I were you I would consider posting a request for help reviewing the article on the talk page of some very experienced reviewer like Chzz. He might be willing to look at it because he is fairly active on Requests for Feedback. I think he would be able to give you the best possible assessment of the article's chances, or direction to take in resolving any problems. Tkotc (talk) 01:06, 16 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

With reference to User:Timothysmardin/ivi, Inc. - I've also added a link to that on your user page, which you can get to by clicking your name at the top, on all Wikipedia pages. (feel free to edit your userpage, of course!)  Chzz  ►  20:22, 16 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

SEE User_talk:Chzz/Archive_28#recommendation/review of ivi article.  Chzz  ►  16:24, 21 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

Welcome and introduction

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Purism Inc. (January 5)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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Draft:Purism Inc. concern

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Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Purism Inc., a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Your draft article, Draft:Purism Inc.

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Hello, Timothysmardin. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Purism Inc.".

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