Your submission at Articles for creation: Pool Kids (March 2) edit

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
CNMall41 (talk) 04:12, 2 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
 
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Thank you @CNMall41 for your comments! This is the first time I have worked on a draft (I didn't create it but I revised and submitted it) so I'm unsure about how (and whether) to proceed.
There are articles about the band on outlets such as Consequence of Sound, Stereogum and an album review on Pitchfork. Would these be references that would indicate broader coverage (and, as such, notability) and it would be worthwhile to include them and resubmit? SpookyFM (talk) 17:38, 3 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
The Vanity Fair article is an example of the type of in-depth coverage needed. If there are other sources just like that then I would suggest adding them, keeping in mind not to WP:REFBOMB. Good luck. --CNMall41 (talk) 21:38, 3 March 2023 (UTC)Reply