Scfslyzkf

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ryutaro Tsuchida (April 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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KylieTastic (talk) 11:57, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

thanks for your review.

I wanna to illustrate that "Ryutaro Tsuchida" is a Japanese chemist that originally proposed the idea of Valence shell electron pair repulsion (VSEPR) theory, which was important for modern molecular structure determination.

I have added another reference from Chemical Society of Japan，“龍太郎, 槌田 (1939). "新簡易原子價論". 日本化學會誌. 60 (3): 245–256.”

so I think the item "Ryutaro Tsuchida" may deserves for a wikipedia article.

I'm looking forward to another review from you. Scfslyzkf (talk) 12:20, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Hello, Scfslyzkf! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KylieTastic (talk) 11:57, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

thanks for your review. I wanna to illustrate that "Ryutaro Tsuchida" is a Japanese chemist that originally proposed the idea of Valence shell electron pair repulsion (VSEPR) theory, which was important for modern molecular structure determination. I have added another reference from Chemical Society of Japan，“龍太郎, 槌田 (1939). "新簡易原子價論". 日本化學會誌. 60 (3): 245–256.” so I think the item "Ryutaro Tsuchida" may deserves for a wikipedia article. I'm looking forward to another review from you. Scfslyzkf (talk) 14:40, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Hi, please note that all new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See WP:N) which in most cases requires significant coverage (WP:SIGCOV) in multiple independent (WP:INDY) reliable sources (WP:RS). So see if you can find any more sources. Does Japanese Wikipedia have an article with any sources you can use? If you wan t a re-review you will need to resubmit with the blue submit button on the notice the article. Regards KylieTastic (talk) 14:48, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

happy to hear you reply.

although Japanese Wikipedia have no item about "Ryutaro Tsuchida(槌田·龍太郎)", but there are two items 槌田敦 and 槌田劭 have mentioned their father "Ryutaro Tsuchida(槌田·龍太郎)", who was a famous chemist at Osaka University.

I have added another 3 references. I think the significance of "Ryutaro Tsuchida(槌田·龍太郎)" is not a problem.

thank you Scfslyzkf (talk) 15:32, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ryutaro Tsuchida (April 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Nearlyevil665 were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ryutaro Tsuchida and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

nearlyevil665 17:30, 13 April 2024 (UTC)

There are four another references I have added already.

Does this review take these references into consideration?

It seems that the reasons that decline my submission is the same as last time!

and even the chemist's name Ryutaro Tsuchida(槌田·龍太郎)" haven't appeared in these opinion. Scfslyzkf (talk) 17:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC)