Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (March 31)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Theroadislong were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Theroadislong (talk) 09:35, 31 March 2020 (UTC)Reply
 
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MfD nomination of User:Polaatx/sandbox

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  User:Polaatx/sandbox, a page which you created or substantially contributed to, has been nominated for deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/User:Polaatx/sandbox and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You are free to edit the content of User:Polaatx/sandbox during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you. JavaHurricane 11:42, 31 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Niccu Tafarrodi (May 23)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by MapleSoy were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
MapleSoy (talk) 21:20, 23 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your AfC submission

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Hi Polaatx, I'll answer the questions that you left on my talk page here. I'll also include some other tips to improve this article. Thank you for patience with the AfC process, which I know can be a bit of a headache!

  • The first main concern is that the article does not currently include multiple independent sources to show that the subject is notable. For example, it would be helpful to include at least one another newspaper/magazine article about the subject's work in public health to show that this was notable.
  • In the absence of additional coverage, we would need to see that the subject meets the criteria outlined at WP:ARTIST.
  • To improve the article, it would be helpful to remove all external links in the body of the text; see WP:ELPOINTS. In addition, it would make sense to remove things that aren't sourced, don't add to the notability of the article, and/or are copied from other sources. This would mean, for example, removing the "Affiliations" section and really trimming down the "Career as an artist" to stick to the facts presented in reliable sources.
  • Finally, I appreciated reading your note about why the documentation for her diplomas cannot be retrieved at this time. I should clarify that we do not actually need to see personal documents like that - what I meant to say is if there's a fact that you know because you know the subject personally, but there is no independent, reliable record of it, then it should not be included in the article. This is why we generally don't recommend writing about subjects you have a close connection to, because it can make it difficult to write a neutral article. (See WP:COI.)

I hope that is helpful. You can post here if you have any further questions and I'll do my best to answer. You are welcome to resubmit after you've made any changes and another editor can take a look.

- MapleSoy (talk) 05:27, 4 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Niccu Tafarrodi

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Hello, Polaatx. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Niccu Tafarrodi".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! UnitedStatesian (talk) 06:38, 31 December 2020 (UTC)Reply