Your submission at Articles for creation: Ish Entertainment (January 24)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bonadea were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
bonadea contributions talk 14:45, 24 January 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hi!
Thank you for this feedback. I have revised the article to remove some of the non-neutral language (ie. changing "Emmy-award winning CEO" to simply "CEO"). I have also added citations for all of the bullet point items, all of which are written by a third party and not related to the subject.
I look forward to your further feedback if necessary, and I appreciate it! Oslofirstave (talk) 16:31, 24 January 2023 (UTC)Reply
 
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ish Entertainment (January 24)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
CNMall41 (talk) 20:11, 24 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael Hirschorn (February 23)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by InterstellarGamer12321 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 12:49, 23 February 2023 (UTC)Reply