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Your submission at Articles for creation: National Dialysis Accreditation Commission (June 5)

Latest comment: 1 year ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robertsky was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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– robertsky (talk) 10:17, 5 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hello, I have edited the page to remove some things that might sound like an advertisement, and added more independent news sources. NDAC is a point of note since it is the first private accreditation organization in history approved by the federal government. There is also a similar organization that does have a wiki paged, called The Joint Commission (Joint Commission). They have been around a lot longer so they have a little more press, but besides their citations I'm struggling to see much of a difference between our page and theirs.

Thank you for your help! MHatNDAC (talk) 15:49, 4 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hello, MHatNDAC! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! – robertsky (talk) 10:17, 5 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: National Dialysis Accreditation Commission (October 22)

Latest comment: 1 year ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 331dot was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The status of other articles is not relevant- it could be that this other article is also inappropriate. Please read other stuff exists. Unless an article is classified as a good article that has been thorougly vetted by the community, it should not be held up as an example or model.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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331dot (talk) 08:27, 22 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:National Dialysis Accreditation Commission

Latest comment: 1 year ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, MHatNDAC. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:National Dialysis Accreditation Commission, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 09:02, 24 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

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