Your submission at Articles for creation: Ginnie Hofmann (September 28)

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William2001(talk) 13:21, 28 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
 
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ginnie Hofmann has been accepted

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Ginnie Hofmann, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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DGG ( talk ) 22:55, 29 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Ways to improve Phineas Banning Blanchard

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Hello, III-eilrahc,

Thank you for creating Phineas Banning Blanchard.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Not sure about this, a lot of sources, but a lot of it looks newsy and trivial.

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Slatersteven (talk) 13:22, 9 October 2019 (UTC)Reply

Hello @Slatersteven:,

I hope I'm replying correctly, as this is my first time replying here.

I'm not sure how to respond, as I made sure to include plenty of references that I thought were substantial. Is the problem that there are too many references and/or too many from contemporaneous news sources?

When preparing this page, I compared to several other sea captain pages already on Wikipedia for both style and content. And I thought (perhaps incorrectly) that the treatment for this page (length, topics) was appropriate.

Please advise. Thanks.

III-eilrahc (talk) 13:58, 9 October 2019 (UTC)Reply

The issue for me is it all seems to be not all that notable, but I cannot check. He just seems to have been just another sea captain.Slatersteven (talk) 14:11, 9 October 2019 (UTC)Reply

Hello @Slatersteven:,

I've made a number of changes to the page that I believe address the issue. These changes include adding references and restructuring the page to emphasize Captain Blanchard's notability in the history of merchant sail and his influence on the maritime industry in the mid-20th century.

As part of this work I enlisted the help of the Penobscot Marine Museum, where Captain Blanchard is represented by numerous objects. They were very enthusiastic and helped by providing the portrait, which I've added to his infobox.

Thanks.

III-eilrahc (talk) 01:52, 16 October 2019 (UTC)Reply

Richard Staples Dodge

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hello! Just a heads up that I took Richard Dodge off the list of artists that you had just tweaked. His reputation was as an illustrator. The list is for artists in the fine arts area, as described at the top of the page. I see you added him to a list of illustrators, which is entirely appropriate! Thanks.ThatMontrealIP (talk) 04:02, 10 February 2020 (UTC)Reply