Your submission at Articles for creation: Grant Howitt (July 20) edit

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SunDawn was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
✠ SunDawn ✠ (contact) 23:32, 20 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
 
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Thank you User:SunDawn - that's really useful. I'll add more and resubmit. Note to self: Re-read this Wikipedia:Notability_(people)#Creative_Professionals

A lot of rewriting was put into the article, if you want to have another look and see what you need to do before resubmitting. BOZ (talk) 03:18, 30 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
Yes, my difficulty if identifying what *is* a reliable secondary source in a medium much of whose documentation is online.
It's similar - though not the same - as issues faced by
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Video_games
I will get round to it. Harrytc (talk) 03:59, 30 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
I went ahead and published this one myself after finding more sources. BOZ (talk) 21:49, 6 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hey, that's amazing! That's a load of work!
There's a couple of terms that aren't right for the UK - grade school, college - and I'll get a set of edits together.
Thank you - he's one of the notables of the current crop of game designers, and it's good to see that recognised. Harrytc (talk) 09:58, 7 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Grant Howitt (November 2) edit

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Rich Smith was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
- RichT|C|E-Mail 18:52, 2 November 2023 (UTC)Reply