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Your submission at Articles for creation: SAFELipo (January 16)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! 78.26 (I'm no IP, talk to me!) 21:01, 16 January 2014 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: SAFELipo (March 10)

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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/SAFELipo

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 17:37, 12 September 2014 (UTC)

Hello JMHamo -

The SAFELipo addition was recommended to be included under the existing 'Liposuction' page. The section for SAFELipo was included under the techniques section. Thank you!

72.29.187.170 (talk) 16:44, 15 September 2014 (UTC)

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Hi Etna-research - looking at your contributions, your account is what we call a "single purpose account" or "SPA". Please read WP:SPA. Because of this, I am providing you with our conflict of interest notice. Please do reply and let us know if you have a relationship or other affiliation with the subject matter that you have been editing about. Thanks.

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Jytdog- Thank you for alerting me of the stale content/COI notice. I have updated my user talk page with a disclaimer as indicated by Wikipedia's Terms of Use. In all instances, my contributions were NOT contingent upon a form of payment from a client. With regards to my addition of SMARTLipo to the existing Liposuction page, this was an editorial recommendation from the reviewer of the initial page submission. I believe the links and references to be sound and not promotional in nature.

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Etna-research (talk) 00:14, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Turning Winds Academic Institute (April 12)

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BenLinus1214^talk 23:03, 12 April 2015 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Turning Winds Academic Institute (June 17)

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E. Lee (talk) 00:53, 17 June 2015 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Turning Winds Academic Institute (July 7)

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LaMona (talk) 23:50, 7 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello! Etna805, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! LaMona (talk) 23:50, 7 July 2015 (UTC)

Potential sources for Draft:Turning Winds Academic Institute

Here are two sources with very basic info:

• "School Detail for Turning Winds Academic Institute". Institute of Education Sciences. US Department of Education. Retrieved 8 June 2015.
• "NATSAP 2014-2015 Directory" (PDF). National Association of Therapeutic Schools and Programs. p. 166. Retrieved 8 June 2015.

NATSAP appears to contain self-reported information, so only use it for something that can't be gotten directly from TWAI's website.

The history section is arguably the most important for Wikipedia's purposes (anyone who wants to know more about what an organization does now can visit the organization's website). The origins of TWAI are not as simple as the company portrays. John Baisden has a long history in the industry, was investigated repeatedly, charged with multiple crimes, was the defendant in several civil suits, and the plaintiff in at least one other. The basic timeline is as follows:

• 1993-06-04 Man arrested for murder of Vanessa Baisden
• 1996-06-02 John Baisden runs Glacier Mountain Expeditions, which takes troubled kids on six-week backpacking trips
• mid-1990s? John Baisden works at CEDU Family of Services
• 1999-09-05 John Baisden runs Glacier Mountain, north of Sandpoint, Idaho, which is investigated by the state licensing arm of Family and Community Services and by Bonner County Planning and Zoning
• 2002-02-23 John Baisden owns Glacier Mountain Educational Services, operates a facility in Cocolalla, Idaho. State Department of Health and Welfare revokes his foster care license. Bonner County files criminal complaint against him for operating facility without a conditional use permit.
• 2002-03-10 John Baisden investigated by the Idaho Attorney General's office for false advertising, and by the Bonner County prosecutor's office for failure to report a crime (abuse at the school)
• 2003-10-01 The Baisdens own Family Solutions Network Inc dba Turning Winds, a school on Lake Cocolalla, Idaho
• 2005-03-17 A student runs away from Turning Winds, an altercation with the Baisdens ensues, Baisdens charged with misdemeanor injury to a child, state later dismisses the charges
• Turning Winds school moves to Troy, Montana
• 2007-03-11 John William Baisden Sr., John William Baisden Jr., Carl Spencer Baisden and their spouses sue Bonner County Sheriff's Office alleging malicious prosecution with regard to the 2005 incident
• 2008-04-15 Turning Winds receives provisional accreditation from NAAS
• 2011-06 Turning Winds receives NIPSA accreditation

These are some sources you could use and follow up on to build a clear picture of the school's origins:

• "Importing Troubled Teenagers Behavior Camps Become Big Business in Region". Spokesman Review. 2 June 1996 – via ProQuest. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |subscription= ignored (|url-access= suggested) (help)
• "Troubled Homes Academies for Wayward Youths Have Their Own Problems with Rules". Spokesman Review. 5 September 1999 – via ProQuest. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |subscription= ignored (|url-access= suggested) (help)
• "Outdoor school loses its license ; Bonner County says facility for troubled kids also operating without permit". Spokesman Review. 23 February 2002 – via ProQuest. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |subscription= ignored (|url-access= suggested) (help)
• "Camps for troubled teens face rules; Some outdoors programs; may give false hopes". Spokesman Review. 10 March 2002 – via ProQuest. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |subscription= ignored (|url-access= suggested) (help)
• "Glacier Mountain Academy runs afoul of authorities". Spokesman Review. 10 March 2002 – via ProQuest. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |subscription= ignored (|url-access= suggested) (help)
• "School operators file civil rights lawsuit". Bonner County Daily Bee. 11 March 2007. Archived from the original on 27 May 2009.
• "Provisional Accreditation for Turning Winds". strugglingteens.com (Press release). Woodbury Reports.
• "Turning Winds Announces NIPSA Accreditation". strugglingteens.com (Press release). Woodbury Reports.

If you have to slash content to keep the draft from depending too heavily on company sources, this document [1] gives an alternative to the company view of what people should know about a school. Worldbruce (talk) 10:58, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: American College of Mohs Surgery (July 26)

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Graeme Bartlett (talk) 01:57, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

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Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question

Hello, Etna805! I'm Timtrent. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk. Fiddle Faddle 22:06, 3 August 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: American College of Mohs Surgery has been accepted

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Turning Winds Academic Institute (2) (January 12)

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 23:12, 12 January 2016 (UTC)

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