Your submission at Articles for creation: Lucy Bullivant (August 31)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AaqibAnjum was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Aaqib Anjum Aafī (talk) 17:24, 31 August 2020 (UTC)Reply
 
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AfC notification: Draft:Lucy Bullivant has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Lucy Bullivant. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 13:01, 19 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lucy Bullivant (September 21)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Hoary were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Hoary (talk) 12:34, 21 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

restitution of feedback box

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I understand that in further editing my draft I should not have deleted the feedback box as it needs to be retained and also contains the resubmit button. I have not done this before and was short of time. I noted the comments and thought I should clear the draft before proceeding. Turns out that was an error. Please would you let me know how I may restitute them, or whether you can personally, so I can further continue to edit the article as per guidance I've been getting.


consultant and leadership

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As a point of clarification, consultants come in many forms and frequently provide leadership eg Sir Norman Foster, the British architect, or specialists working for McKinsey. However I completely take your point about the required neutrality of the text to be achieved in a subsequent draft.


Preparation of the article

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The article in question, which I'll edit further to the best of my ability in line with the comments provided, is not being paid for and there is no conflict of interest.

Remove all the hyperlinks. Some may be valid as references. 31.209.146.55 (talk) 22:12, 23 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
To elaborate: external links belong in references, in content notes (which most articles don't have and don't need), in lists of "External links" (which must be short), and perhaps in one or two other places that I can't think of offhand. They don't belong in the main text. Therefore, to take one example, not She regularly gives [https://www.speakersassociates.com/speaker/lucy-bullivant keynotes] globally. but instead She regularly gives keynotes globally.<ref>[reliable, independent source here]</ref>. (Yes, a different source would be greatly preferable, as the source you give is one that advertises her services: it's not independent of her.) ¶ If there is indeed no conflict of interest, then I'm puzzled by how you were able to photograph this portrait. -- Hoary (talk) 22:58, 23 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Lucy Bullivant

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Hello, Elementaryreality. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Lucy Bullivant".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. plicit 23:45, 23 March 2022 (UTC)Reply