Your submission at Articles for creation: Edadac (May 30)

edit
 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Dan arndt were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Dan arndt (talk) 05:39, 30 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hai dato un giudizio troppo affrettato. Non ci tengo per me riguardo all'articolo che propongo, per cui, se hai voglia di approfondire converrai con me sulla buona e importante finalità di dare evidenza a Giuseppe Monterosso (1866-1947) così come puoi vedere nel link..... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Edadac.
Grazie per l'attenzione.
Edadac Edadac (talk) 18:06, 30 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Dan arndt: Hi, I'm making improvements to the page. I kindly ask you to check if the bibliography has improved (and if the relevant notice can be removed). In the discussion page I explained some important questions, that of Ethnohistory and that of the motivations of this "Monterosso" page, which I hope you will want to take into consideration.
For the future I intend to insert the sections: Studies and diploma (which is already on the discussion page); musical activity and wedding Livorno.
I intend to group and expand into a single section, "The activity in the Catania area" [or "The Catania period"] (e.g.: Acireale Catania, Aci Catena).
I'm preparing and translating another piece that will be included in the section "Monterosso in Malta" with three subsections "With the band of Vilhena"; "With the Prince of Wales"; "With the King's Own Band and at the Manoel Theater - Valletta".
P.S.: I studied a little Daniel Arnaut, troubadour, Arnaut poet of the nineteenth century and Leopardi's connections with him.
Edadac (talk) 13:03, 26 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
 
Hello, Edadac! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dan arndt (talk) 05:39, 30 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
As soon as I can I go to see and participate. I welcome any suggestions here too. I'm not discouraged, I try to be optimistic. Thank you.
Edadac (talk) Edadac (talk) 13:07, 26 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Edadac (May 31)

edit
 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CurryTime7-24 was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
CurryTime7-24 (talk) 01:02, 31 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
I created this page only for cultural reasons. I have no economic interest. The page is not created for promotional purposes because there is nothing for sale concerning Giuseppe Monterosso Edadac (talk) 01:00, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
I am not able to fix the page permanently. I'm not an expert yet. I must specify that it was me who created "all" the pages on Giuseppe Monterosso. I copied and pasted a page of another character to have it as a prototype edition. I modified everything without unduly using other people's texts. The page created was hastily blocked without the person who made it having properly verified the page and my texts. Hence the great confusion and operational impediments. Please: some expert editor takes care of doing what I don't know how to do, in order to approve the page on Giuseppe Monterosso. Now I'm going to sleep I'm very tired. Good night or good morning!!! Edadac (talk) 01:26, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

Speedy deletion nomination of Giuseppe Monterosso

edit
 

A tag has been placed on Giuseppe Monterosso requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done for the following reason:

Author copy and pasted a draft that was declined multiple times with no improvements. See Draft:Edadac.

Under the criteria for speedy deletion, pages that meet certain criteria may be deleted at any time.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. Dylan | ✉   00:47, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

Please wait to delete the page. I'm not familiar with Wikipedia procedures, but I'm honest and sincere. I made many changes to many wikipedia entries, with seriousness and scientificity. Giuseppe Monterosso is a nineteenth century musician and it is not easy that he can reflect all the wikipedia requirements Edadac (talk) 00:58, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
I created this page only for cultural reasons. I have no economic interest. The page is not created for promotional purposes because there is nothing for sale concerning Giuseppe Monteross Edadac (talk) 01:01, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
The works of Giuseppe Monterosso are reputed to be of a high standard. The unpublished manuscripts are kept in the Historical Archive of Acireale. Edadac (talk) 01:03, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
The published works of Giuseppe Monterosso were kept in the headquarters of the King's Own Band of Malta, of the Vilhena Band of Malta and of the Prince Of Wales of Malta: the works were lost in the aerial bombing of the Island of Malta in 1941. For this reason some wikipedia encyclopedic requirements cannot be found. Edadac (talk) 01:07, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
I invite wikipedia administrators to carefully read the notes and the bibliography.
I hope I was able to give reasons not to delete the page. Thanks for the attention. Help me give the right honor of memory to Giuseppe Monterosso. Edadac (talk) 01:09, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

the page "Giuseppe Monterosso (Q119122223)"

edit

I want to know - if I have to compile the parts of the page "Giuseppe Monterosso (Q119122223)" to arrange the text in the way Wikipedia requires. - if the page needs to be submitted for approval - where I have to read the instructions to operate. I declare that I am registered on Wikipedia for the Italian part and that I do not read and write English well. On this depends my disorientation and my confusion. - have the link to make the page in English, but using a window in Italian. This page has caused me many problems and rejections. I think it is necessary for me to clarify the following arguments also in this discussion. I'm not familiar with Wikipedia procedures, but I'm honest and sincere. I made many changes to many wikipedia entries, with seriousness and scientificity. Giuseppe Monterosso is a nineteenth century musician and it is not easy that he can reflect all the wikipedia requirements. I created this page only for cultural reasons. I have no economic interest. The page is not created for promotional purposes because there is nothing for sale concerning Giuseppe Monterosso. The works of Giuseppe Monterosso are reputed to be of a high standard. The unpublished manuscripts are kept in the Historical Archive of Acireale. The published works of Giuseppe Monterosso were kept in the headquarters of the King's Own Band of Malta, of the Vilhena Band of Malta and of the Prince Of Wales of Malta: the works were lost in the aerial bombing of the Island of Malta in 1941. For this reason some wikipedia encyclopedic requirements cannot be found. I invite wikipedia administrators to carefully read the notes and the bibliography. I hope I was able to give reasons not to delete the page. Thanks for the attention. Help me give the right honor of memory to Giuseppe Monterosso. Edadac (talk) 15:06, 6 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

Positive evolutions of the page

edit

I fixed the bibliography and wrote in the messages that the cited texts are all officially accepted in the Italian opac sbn. Even the citations in the body of the article are those used in university texts. I kindly ask the admins to at least remove the warning "This article has an unclear citation style. (June 2023)". I believe that the quotes I have inserted are necessary and are reliable. If, on the other hand, in English you cite in another way, with a different arrangement of the elements (author, title, place, publisher, year, page numbers.. etc.) and punctuation, then I hope that someone more expert will help. The removal of "This article has an unclear citation style" would be a sign of encouragement for the improvement and implementation of the Monterosso voice. I don't want to see my work in vain. I work dedicating a lot of time to studying and processing. Invitation to listen to the recording of the Monterosso Waltz. Thanks for your attention and cooperation. 'm waiting for a sign of optimism. Edadac (talk) 00:44, 27 June 2023 (UTC)Reply