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Ok this is silly, I only wanted to add an article about Drifting Sun because they are a band which makes music and releases it to the public.
That, in my opinion (but obviously not the opinion of the Wikipedia admins who deemed the article unsuitable), justifies an insertion in your encyclopedia.
Yes, it is an article about my own band, and yes it was submitted by me.
Does writing an article about my own band make it less real? We still bring an active participation to the current music scene as artists; to what degree does it matter who wrote what, as long as it is based on real facts about the band, which my article was?
if you take, or took, the time to check the links I included of album reviews etc to support my submission, you will see, or would have seen, that these were truly independent and unbiased contributions which did support the submission I made...
What difference would it have made if I'd asked my friend Michael or my aunt Betty to submit the article on my behalf? It would still relate to content about the same music band which still does what it does: making music and releasing it to the public.
And yes again, I made the mistake of linking the page to the band's official website (what band does not have an official website where they talk about themselves?) Obviously, any info about a band mentioned in any site will somehow match the info about the said band in any other site... we are playing on words here, and again, the info mentioned in the official website tells the story of the band, which in my book is real information and not the fantasy of some twisted individuals making up facts about themselves, since it is the recount of how a band started and what they have done so far, nothing more.
I removed the official website's link so as to comply with your rules, after it was brought to my attention that that was the main sticking point, or rather: after you made me believe that that was the reason why you were keeping my submission on hold). I offered to modify the content so that it didn't match that of the website mentioned above (or in other words, I offered to rewrite the same information using different words, so you wouldn't think I was trying to plagiarize... myself). I can't honestly see what more I could have done to show that I was genuinely trying to add an insertion based on facts and not fiction... how many different ways are there to talk about the story of a band, how the project was created, what albums they have released and on what label they are signed, what their plans are etc?
Those were genuine newbie mistakes, and forgive me for making those mistakes, as I am a musician not a journalist or a writer. You guys could have given me the chance to rectify those honest mistakes instead of taking the entire article out and banning my username, which has now resulted in me being back to square one, and judging by the response I received from the moderator who took town the article, square one is where I now am most likely to remain for all times due to my fatal error.
The point I am making here, if anyone cares to give it some thought (as I have given it a lot of thought myself since I started this whole creation process and spent so many weeks struggling to meet your requirements and battling with the contributors to try and justify the worthiness of my article) is that we, as new (and obviously inexperienced) people attempting to include genuine information about topics which relate to the public domain inasmuch as the said topics are about facts on people, organizations or whatever else - a musical band, in this instance - are faced with an extremely discouraging wall of criticism when trying to contribute to the encyclopedia, and not really given much chance to fight for our cause.
I am not going to make another attempt to write a different article about Drifting Sun via a different username (as one of your contributors suggested I should try and do) because I find the very idea sneaky, if I'm totally honest. However, I am still eager and willing to be given the opportunity to modify the original article I attempted to post, so long as the sources I provide (I am not referring to Drifting Sun's official website link here of course, but to the links from independent magazines which have posted genuine and impartial reviews of Drifting Sun's records, more to come as the band's new album is out in a couple of weeks and it will generate plenty more exposure from the media in the next few months) are actually being genuinely verified by your moderators in an impartial way also. If you decide that Drifting Sun should be given that opportunity to be included in Wikipedia, then we can work something out on that basis; otherwise if your decision is final then it will be a shame but I will respect that decision and accept that Wikipedia does not see Drifting Sun as the real active band they are, thanks.
Best regards
Pat
DriftingSunWeb (talk) 11:16, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
- Hello, Pat. I've just seen your note on my talk page and was stopping by to talk to you, but I see things have changed a bit since you wrote.
- There are a couple of issues here that might do with additional explanation.
- First, Wikipedia is a pretty popular website, as you know, and unfortunately this means that a lot of people try to use it for promotion. Since our goal is to be a source of neutral information based on reliable sources about notable entities, our community tends to watch out for this pretty diligently. It is because of this tendency of external entitites to want to use Wikipedia for promotion that we have certain policies about editing articles related to you or your business.
- Backing up a bit, though, a key word in our goal is "notable" - a long time before I got here, seven years ago (roughly), the community decided that Wikipedia couldn't cover everything. They came up with the concept of notability to help determine what content we should have - where notability is generally defined as broad and deep coverage in unconnected, reliable sources. Basically, if reliable sources think a subject is worth writing about, Wikipedia does, too. There are subject specific guidelines as well, developed later, such as Wikipedia:Music, that can help determine when a subject is ready for inclusion here. These guidelines do, obviously, tend to prioritize trendy and popular topics. Less covered genres of music may get short shrift. I myself have enjoyed working on articles related to the old jazz classics. Occasionally I encounter an album I know is important, but I can't find sources to verify that it is notable, so I can't include it here. It's frustrating, but it's the best system we've come up with for trying to keep content in Wikipedia generally relevant, encyclopedic, as opposed to individualized and specialized.
- We consider newspapers, magazines, books by major publishers, and established industry websites reliable sources. User-generated content (like Wikipedia) or fan pages are not reliable. For most things, commercial sites are not reliable. WP:IRS can help establish some of the things we look for.
- Linking to your band's official website is not a problem. Copying content from your band's official website (or from any other source) is. Basically, the US copyright law that governs Wikipedia reserves the right to that content to the creators, and because we do not have any way to verify your identity on registration, we do have to ask people to verify license through external means. This can be done through sending an email proving you own copyright and licensing it appropriate or by putting a note on your website licensing the content. (See Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials. In the absence of verification of license, we have no choice but to delete the content, even if you tell us that it is yours and that it's okay for us to use it. Since this is a legal matter, we have to comply with the formalities. :)
- That doesn't address the conflict issue, though. Basically, we prefer that your aunts and uncles and friends not write about your band, either. Ideally, an article about your band will be written by somebody who has no connection with it at all. (See Wikipedia:Conflict of interest). However, submitting drafts in the way that you did and being transparent about your connection is a good faith approach. It's not an easy one, but it's good faith. If you do create another account, in your own name (or any colorful, personal username that appeals to you), I would request that you do keep that good faith transparency. If you go through the draft process, either licensing the material on your website or putting the content in new language, the reviewer can determine if the material accords with our policies and guidelines.
- I'm not sure that the list of links you provided will quite fit the bill, however. It's not a question of whether the band is real, but whether it is "notable" as Wikipedia defines notability. And, again, I have had to refrain from creating articles about a number of albums I believe to be important (even though I am experienced here and a volunteer administrator) because I can't verify it. If your new album generates more media exposure, then it may provide the kind of sources we need, although with non-mainstream music this can remain a bit of a challenge.
- Here are the links you provided:
- http://www.spirit-of-metal.com/album-groupe-Drifting_Sun-nom_album-Drifting_Sun-l-en.html
- http://www.arlequins.it/pagine/articoli/alfa/corpo.asp?avar1=drifting+sun&avar2=&avar3=&avar4=&avar5=&avar6=&Submit=Cerca&ch=566
- http://www.arlequins.it/pagine/articoli/alfa/corpo.asp?avar1=drifting+sun&avar2=&avar3=&avar4=&avar5=&avar6=&Submit=Cerca&ch=1486
- http://www.passionprogressive.fr/html/image-driftingsun.htm
- http://www.progresiste.com/reviews.php
- http://www.iopages.nl/editie/id/6/io-pages-6
- http://www.iopages.nl/editie/id/21/io-pages-21
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4IQqi97sQYQ
- http://www.deezer.com/album/45341
- http://www.iopages.nl/editie/id/6/io-pages-6
- http://www.iopages.nl/editie/id/21/io-pages-21
- http://koid9.fanzine.free.fr/chroniques.php?kro=1261999685
- http://koid9.fanzine.free.fr/chroniques.php?kro=1261309686
- http://www.progresiste.com/reviews.php
- http://www.progressive-newsletter.de/index.htm?/cd14_6.htm
- http://www.progressive-newsletter.de/index.htm?/cd25_9.htm
- http://www.spirit-of-metal.com/groupe-groupe-Drifting_Sun-l-en.html
- I would recommend evaluating these against the reliable sources guideline and determining if your band meets WP:MUSIC or, alternatively, the general notability guideline - if there is broad, deep coverage about it in the kinds of sources we are permitted to use. If not, your best bet is to wait until it does. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 16:25, 1 January 2015 (UTC)