AfC notification: Draft:Jason Miller (occultist) has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jason Miller (occultist). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 03:40, 19 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Draft:Jason Miller (occultist)

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Hi, I got your message. Welcome to Wikipedia. I guess I have a few comments to make about different things. Active links in my post are mostlyto our policies and guidelines.

First, please do not use Wikipedia email unless you need to have a private discussion only indirectly related to encyclopedic content; anything to do with content should be discussed in public view, such as on user talk pages. So I am replying to your email here.

Second, you are editing on behalf of a registered company, which creates an immediate and strong conflict of interest. You need to make this very clear on your user page, and also to clarify your relation to Jason Miller. On the other hand, you may well have expert knowledge which you can draw on for many articles, so please do not be unduly put off - I merely urge caution.

Third, Wikipedia has what I would call a strong positivist approach to paranormal, occult and other fringe phenomena. That is to say, both policy and the community are dominated by the view that it is all unproven nonsense. Your article will be appraised by very jaundiced eyes, be warned.

OK, now to your draft article Draft:Jason Miller (occultist). Use of the Draft namespace is not mandatory and anybody can move the article into the main content. However if it is unacceptable it is far more likely to be summarily deleted, so I would not recommend it. Asking experienced editors like myself to take a look is a good way to speed up the review process. I took a quick look and it is clearly not acceptable as it stands. Some observations:

  • Referencing overall is very weak. Few if any of your references are to independent reliable sources. I can find no corroboration of Miller's notability, such as commentary in independent publications or major media attention. Without these, your article will never pass review.
  • Links to pay-for training courses constitute outright spam and need to be deleted ASAP, I may well do that myself.
  • Claims about him appear unsupported or vague. Where is his music? Who claims that his roles as a Sorcerer (paranormal) and a magician (paranormal) are distinct, and on what basis? As they stand, they lend a promotional air and provide good examples of what you need to avoid - either bolster them with reliable sources or delete them.
  • You say you feel that he is pretty important. What specifically is important about him and which reliable sources say so?

I am sorry if all that sounds a bit harsh, but that is the way Wikipedia works. In particular, if insufficient independent reliable sources exist to verify his notability then an article for him would be inappropriate.

A final word of caution. A great many people constantly come along thinking they can game the system and slip stuff past us. It never works for long, we have evolved extremely robust community and technical measures in place to catch and block such miscreants. They sometimes waste a huge amount of time and effort finding that out the hard way. I trust that you are not remotely of that kind, and I sincerely hope you can find an editorial niche here.

— Cheers, Steelpillow (Talk) 05:44, 21 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hello Steel Pillow,

Actually, your feedback is extremely valuable, and I greatly appreciate it!

I think I'll address your commentary in reverse order.

  • Thank you for the warning. More than likely my editorial niche will probably be related to critical theory and the occult/paranormal, but only time will tell.
  • From what I've seen, several individuals in the occult community tend to be ungrounded. Something that I have noticed pertaining to Jason Miller is his ability to ground them into reality: getting a job, starting a business, grappling with finances, etc etc. Whether it be through his magical teachings or just that he is a teacher or life coach, I think this is pretty noteworthy. Furthermore, from a magical perspective, within the magical community, it seems to me he does offer a distinct paradigmatic shift from chaos magic and "traditional" magic, both of which I mentioned in the article. It may be that perhaps more needs to be written chaonimism from members of the occult community. Maybe I'll try to start that conversation somehow.
  • I appreciate the comments about his music. I will see if I can hunt down resources.
  • Next, what do you define as "independent" sources? I know that he has been published by folks within our community, and several people who are popular within the occult community---some of whom are of the chaos magician persuasion such as Gordon White---have interviewed him. Are you referring to media produced by a non-subaltern community, like Newsweek?

I'm definitely going to incorporate your feedback. Out of curiosity, how would one move something from draft space to mainspace? It's been a long time since I've edited and published something onto Wikipedia. As you can tell, I am a part of the magical and occult community, albeit somewhat displaced. I will talk a little more about my identity on my user page to address any potential conflict of interest issues

Much kindness,

CosmicSophisTreeLLC 07:07, 21 July 2020 (UTC).

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Miller (occultist) (August 9)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DGG were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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Your draft article, Draft:Jason Miller (occultist)

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Hello, CosmicSophisTree. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jason Miller".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Celestina007 (talk) 10:10, 9 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Jason Miller (occultist)

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Hello, CosmicSophisTree. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jason Miller".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. plicit 12:13, 9 August 2021 (UTC)Reply