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RH is notable, but this article is full of promotional language. Please: 1.remove all adjectives of praise or excellence 2. Remove student prizes and awards, and scholarships 3, If his advisor is notable ,link to the WP article on them. 4. Link to the thesis 5. Give dates for all appointments. 4. Is he solely responsible for the study abroad programs? 5. For his books add references to substantial reviews in third-party published academic sources 6. Everything in the bio section needs a sourcee to his formal university CV; everything giving the importance of his work in the research section needs a third party source. 7. remove awards from his own university. . Thanks! DGG ( talk ) 02:28, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Even more important Since this is your only contribution, and since it is written in the format of a press release, it is reasonable to ask whether you are a connected contributor, in which case you must declare the connection. Please see our rules on Conflict of Interest If you are writing this for pay or as a staff member of the organization, see also WP:PAID for the necessary disclosures. I will review it as soon as you inform me that you have provided the necessary information

Thank you, DGG, for your comments

I am working on editing my draft article for Robert Hahn (Professor of Philosophy). Thank you for helpful comments, DGG. I have worked with Robert Hahn for the past 25 years and therefore have declared a COI on my user page. Cjg0819 (talk) 17:16, 20 January 2022 (UTC)Cjg0819

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Your draft article, Draft:Robert Hahn (Professor of Philosophy)

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:10, 20 July 2022 (UTC)