Carsonbanks812

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Hey Carson!

Your page looks really good and I like your image. Even though I wasn't suppose to, before I knew that, I went through your page and made a few minor changes (wording, added a few brackets too). Still, I would go through at least one more time and get all the brackets in order. Overall, your page was really easy to read and I understood most of what you were trying to convey.

I left a note on your page (whoops) under the metamorphic section... I was suggesting that maybe you could put that information in a list fashion? Just to break up all the words? Or even a table.. <-- you can get that template from another page that uses a table.

Underneath the Metamorphism header, what is the significance of the higher water pressures? You might want to be a little clearer on that.

You might need to go through and check your references.

You might not feel like doing this, but it would be pretty interesting to do a timeline of the events, or even a timeline image of the content break-up and reforming? IT's a lot, but it's really cool stuff you're talking about.

Also, your last short paragraph (right before the reference list) seems a little out of place. The information is cool, but maybe you can move it somewhere else on the page.

You did a great job!!

--- Annie — Preceding unsigned comment added by A.bre.clare. (talk • contribs) 23:45, 13 October 2014 (UTC)

Feedback Jiawei

Hi, Carson

Your page is nice. I like the layout of your page, it's readable and well arranged. The description table on the right is very informative, although I think you might want to improve the resolution and to increase the size of your "Four distinct metamorphic complexes" figure. It's hard to read, and I had to click this image to get a bigger （yet still not well enough) version.

I have a few suggestions for you, hope you find them helpful.

In the head part of your article, you mentioned four geological units: Napier Complex (Archaean), Rayner Complex (late-Proterozoic), Lützow-Holm Complex (LHC) (early-Paleozoic) and Yamato–Belgica Complex (early-Paleozoic). And in the following Metamorphism section, you only introduced three major metamorphic core complex, all included except the Yamato - Belgica Complex. Is the Yamato - Belgica Complex not a major metamorphic core complex? It's better to give a introduction to this geological unit.

Your title is Geology of Enderby Land. It's a very board topic and includes tons of information and aspects. I understand it's hard to fully cover this topic, but since this place is antarctic, I think it's better to add a subtitle like Glacial activity or anything related to the glacier. That plays an important role in geological time scale.

In metamorphism section. Can you try to add a figure about the pressure and temperature for different metamorphism phases. That helps viewer with little background about the metamorphism.

The content is concise and easy to understand. It's a good article for general geology knowledge concerning the Enderby land. Some slight improvement may make it better! I think what you create is a good job.

Jiawei Zuo MichaelZuo (talk) 05:56, 18 November 2014 (UTC)

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Hi Carsonbanks812. Thanks for your edits to the Porcupine Seabight article. You've added a lot of information and the article is undoubtedly better thanks to your hard work. Just a couple of suggestions, if I may. First, please could you include edit summaries when you change pages? This allows other editors to know what you're up to and why. And second, I noticed you had removed some non-geological content from the page without explanation, which might have been a mistake. Don't worry as I've reinstated this information, which was referenced and may be of interest to the general reader to whom Wikipedia panders. Thanks again for your constructive edits and good luck with you studies. --Wavehunter (talk) 07:36, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

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Carson I am very impressed with the lay out of your page, but could you include more information in your Geologic History section. I understand that there was rifting, but what geological event caused this, what plate tectonics were involved? Was there volcanic activity? Extensional, compressional activity? Basin inversion? The carbonate mounds were formed by the traps of fine sediment from corals, during what time in history did these corals form and what depositional environment was before and after the cold water corals? If you could provide more information on the tectonic history of the region that would be great, but overall the page looks really good with your figures, I know I have to put some on mine also. This gave me some idea on what I should include in my wikipedia page. Bmogro1 (talk) 00:21, 23 February 2015 (UTC)Bmogro1

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