BWIEG

Bom Sucesso Resort moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Bom Sucesso Resort. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has too many problems of language or grammar, it is promotional and reads like an advertisement, you may have a possible Conflict of Interest and in particular, I think this article is about a notable subject, and that you have a lot of good content in the page. Thanks very much for your work sharing information about the resort and its importance. However, the language reads as being more promotional than encyclopedic, with terms in the introduction like "is a testament to", "unique", "iconic", and "meticulously designed". Phrases like "I'm not going to talk about architecture here" likewise do not match the style of an encyclopedia, which should be written from a neutral point of view. The sections also have excessive information, like lists of architects and dimensions of buildings, which are not notable details.. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Astrophobe (talk) 20:29, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

Hello Astrophobe.

Thank you for your feedback!

What do you mean by:"The sections also have excessive information, like lists of architects and dimensions of buildings, which are not notable details."

You would not list the architects involved in the project? I think its important to know who was involved. I can see its may don't need to go into detail of houses. BWIEG (talk) 20:33, 9 December 2023 (UTC)

Hi BWIEG, sorry I missed this message earlier. I see that a lot has changed, and that you've now gone through the Articles for Creation process. Would still like to discuss the page and what kinds of changes might help improve it? - Astrophobe (talk) 15:02, 9 February 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bom Sucesso Resort (December 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by PK650 was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Bom Sucesso Resort and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

PK650 (talk) 04:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

Hello, BWIEG! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! PK650 (talk) 04:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Bom Sucesso Resort

Hello, BWIEG. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Bom Sucesso Resort, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 01:08, 26 May 2024 (UTC)