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October 2016 edit

  Hello, I'm Ronz. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you.

See also WP:COI in case it might apply. --Ronz (talk) 15:18, 27 October 2016 (UTC)Reply


Thanks for contacting me. If you can find reliable, independent sources to expand the articles, please do so. I'd be happy to help. Both articles are magnets for advertising, and sources like medifrancesolution.com are not appropriate and tend to be removed quickly with little explanation. --Ronz (talk) 22:00, 27 October 2016 (UTC)Reply


Thank you for your help, Ronz. Going back to the subject of Welness tourism, I am having trouble finding independent sources regarding the elness centers that exist in France. I have writtin the copy for the article from my common knowledge because I live in France. This is why I said that "many world famous resorts are situated...", since I know that these brands are known everywhere, for example, Vichy sells its cosmetic products and Evian - its water. I was able to find a dscription of French resorts and programs on the official site of the French Tourism Development Agency, however, I am afraid that it might be considered promotional. Here are the links: [1] [2] I was also able to go through the book "Health and Welness tourism" by P. Erfurt-Cooper and M. Cooper (link [3] that highlights the histoiry of thermal cures in France on pages 7 and 120. Could you please advise on the sources, if I can use them or not? Thank you in advance! Amy334455 (talk) 14:29, 31 October 2016 (UTC)Amy334455Reply

I think you are getting a good sense of it. The tourism sites are questionable, the book far better. They could be used to supplement and expand articles in Category:Spa_towns_in_France. Because the websites don't address the topics of Wellness tourism and Medical tourism in general, they probably shouldn't be used in those two articles. The book looks promising. Nice find! --Ronz (talk) 16:01, 31 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Speedy deletion nomination of Intelligent Security edit

 

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A tag has been placed on Intelligent Security, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. WWGB (talk) 11:53, 21 March 2017 (UTC)Reply