Talk:Muthanga incident
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Article still needs work edit
The article is missing the section that covers that actual incident. The lead section mentions firing 18 rounds, did they mention who was killed, how and why? I renamed the strikes part to Background. Also is there some notable impact from this incident besides that they did a final death toll count and punished some people? Were any laws changed? What happened to the groups affected? Were there further incidents? Once the sections are filled in you can resubmit this for copyediting. -AngusWOOF (talk) 22:10, 9 January 2014 (UTC)
Chronology of Events edit
I've added a chronology of events summarizing the incidents, pls editors, pls keep those there. A summary always help to achieve the reasoning easier. Please add those back, no vandalism pls. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Almithra (talk • contribs) 22:35, 31 October 2014 (UTC)