Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 2)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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Speedy deletion nomination of Kalvithanthai Haji SMS Shaik Jalaludeen

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A tag has been placed on Kalvithanthai Haji SMS Shaik Jalaludeen, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia ᐐT₳LKᐬ 20:45, 3 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

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  Please do not remove speedy deletion notices from pages you have created yourself. If you believe the page should not be deleted, you may contest the deletion by clicking on the button that says: Contest this speedy deletion, which appears inside the speedy deletion notice. This will allow you to make your case on the talk page. Administrators will consider your reasoning before deciding what to do with the article. Thank you. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia ᐐT₳LKᐬ 21:05, 3 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Speedy deletion nomination of Kalvithanthai Haji SMS Shaik Jalaludeen

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A tag has been placed on Kalvithanthai Haji SMS Shaik Jalaludeen, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Cabayi (talk) 14:07, 22 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Speedy deletion nomination of Kalvithanthai Haji SMS Shaik Jalaludeen

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Hello Adiraihaja,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Kalvithanthai Haji SMS Shaik Jalaludeen for deletion, because the article doesn't clearly indicate why the subject is important enough to be included in an encyclopedia.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Thanks!

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Onel5969 TT me 12:07, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

January 2019

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This user's unblock request has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without good reason (see the blocking policy).

Adiraihaja (block logactive blocksglobal blockscontribsdeleted contribsfilter logcreation logchange block settingsunblockcheckuser (log))


Request reason:

I want to create a Biography for Kalvithanthai Haji SMS Shaik Jalaludeen. He was a famous philanthropist who lived in Adirampattinam, Tamil Nadu, India and he established a number of educational institutions in Adirampattinam town. Therefore, I request you to unblock me in order to complete the contribution to the Wikipedia 08:23, 16 January 2019 (UTC) Adiraihaja

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It's possible that this gentleman is a suitable subject for a Wikipedia article, but there were so many problems with your submission that it would require a complete re-write before being considered. Before unblocking you, we need to know that these problems will not occur again. Please explain, in your own words, what was wrong with the draft you submitted, and why you were subsequently blocked. Yunshui  08:35, 16 January 2019 (UTC)Reply


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This user's unblock request has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without good reason (see the blocking policy).

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Request reason:

The draft article was poorly sourced and sometimes unreferenced. I would resubmit the article according to the Wikipedia policies Adiraihaja (talk) 08:45, 16 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

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There was a lot more wrong with it than that. Please have a read of WP:NPOV and then think again about what you wrote. Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 10:03, 16 January 2019 (UTC)Reply


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This user's unblock request has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without good reason (see the blocking policy).

Adiraihaja (block logactive blocksglobal blockscontribsdeleted contribsfilter logcreation logchange block settingsunblockcheckuser (log))


Request reason:

As advised by you, I have read the WP:NPOV fully and accept the norms of Wikipedia while writing the article. The draft article contains some unbalanced sentences that need to be removed. I assure you that I would follow the required guidelines in the future. Hence I request you unblock me to edit the article. Adiraihaja (talk) 10:44, 16 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

Decline reason:

Given your responses, it would clearly harm Wikipedia to unblock you at this time because you have no idea how to write a neutral article. Yamla (talk) 11:25, 16 January 2019 (UTC)Reply


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  • As one example, you wrote "The darling son of Adirampattinam became very dear to Allah and reached His abode on October 2, 1986. He set an example to others. Haji.S.M.S.Shaik Jalaludeen was born great and also achieved greatness by his immortal activities. Thus he lives in the midst of us forever." How would you rewrite that if you were unblocked? Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 10:51, 16 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
    As indicated by you, the sentence will be rewritten as " After achieving greatness by his immortal activities, Haji S.M.S. Shaik Jalaludeen died on October 2, 1986. He lives in the midst of us through his valuable service to the society. Adiraihaja (talk) 11:03, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
    Firstly, you should not rewrite the unblock request that I replied to and only include your latest reply in it, as that will make it confusing for other people to follow. Just add your reply below mine, as I have reformatted here.

    Next, sorry, but that shows you really don't understand the problems at all. A Wikipedia article should be factual and neutral in tone, not full of praise for the subject - and your draft was full of sycophantic praise from start to finish. An article is supposed to be informative and educational, and not an obituary, a memorial or a monument. So "After achieving greatness by his immortal activities" should not be there, and "He lives in the midst of us through his valuable service to the society" should not be there. The sample I quoted should be written as simply something like "Haji S.M.S. Shaik Jalaludeen died on October 2, 1986." and nothing else. Fact, verifiable sourced fact, and only fact - no opinion, no praise, no editorializing. The whole article suffered from the same problem. Please thoroughly read WP:NPOV again, and also please read WP:PEACOCK. Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 11:19, 16 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

You've demonstrated that you are not capable of doing so. Very likely, you won't be unblocked without a promise to avoid editing in that subject area. --Yamla (talk) 13:26, 16 January 2019 (UTC)Reply


  • I have understood the problem. If you unblock me, I would contribute to the Wikipedia within the policies and guidelines. The mistake happened since it is my first article on Wikipedia. I assure you that I would not commit such errors in writing an article in the future. Adiraihaja (talk) 05:15, 17 January 2019 (UTC)Reply