Adamsbrainsway

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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David.moreno72 09:00, 10 September 2017 (UTC)

Hello! Adamsbrainsway, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! David.moreno72 09:00, 10 September 2017 (UTC)

Why your submission was declined (and deleted)

In the notice that your submission was declined, it says This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

In other words, you need to cite some professionally-published mainstream academic or journalistic sources. For the submission to survive as an independent article, at least two of those sources need to be independent of and unaffiliated with the subject.

Also, you need to paraphrase sources instead of plagiarizing them. I have deleted User:Adamsbrainsway/sandbox because it plagiarized from this website. As part of your user name is the same as that website, the only reasonable conclusion is that you work for Brainsway (and so have a conflict of interest) and that your account was even created to promote Brainsway and its staff (which is against our policies). Per WP:PAID, you must disclose your employer on your user page (not doing so violates the terms and conditions of the site). You can use the following template to do so: {{paid}}.

Also, you should not edit any articles relating to Brainsway or individuals involved with it. Instead, you can request edits on the article's talk page (if it exists). If there is no article, you can suggest articles at WP:AFC. Ian.thomson (talk) 13:47, 10 September 2017 (UTC)