Template:Did you know nominations/Sieges of Tiberias (1742–1743)

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The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk) 23:11, 2 November 2022 (UTC)

Sieges of Tiberias (1742–1743)

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... that Sulayman Pasha al-Azm lifted the 1742 siege of Zahir al-Umar in Tiberias to lead the Hajj pilgrim caravan to Mecca? Source: Philipp, Thomas (2001) Acre: The Rise and Fall of a Palestinian City, p. 35
- ALT1 ... that Sulayman Pasha al-Azm lifted his 1742 siege of Tiberias to lead the Hajj pilgrim caravan to Mecca? Source: Philipp, Thomas (2001) Acre: The Rise and Fall of a Palestinian City, p. 35
- Reviewed: Ocoee salamander
- Comment: ~~QPQ Review pending~~ Completed.

Moved to mainspace by Al Ameer son (talk). Self-nominated at 17:11, 9 October 2022 (UTC).

@Al Ameer son: another excellent article – thank you. The main missing piece for the nomination is the QPQ. The hook is within policy and well sourced, and the article meets all the criteria and more. Just three small points:
- Please disambiguate Ottoman in the lede

Done.

- Please add a citation for the first paragraph under background

Added a couple, but it will require multiple, different citations so I am working on finishing this.

- Could you consider deleting the words "Zahir al-Umar in" in the hook language, and replacing "the siege" with "his siege", to make it clearer? I had to read it a few times before I fully understood the hook.

I had the same impression but decided to continue the shameless plug to Zahir al-Umar. Modified now as ALT1.

Onceinawhile (talk) 16:02, 12 October 2022 (UTC)

@Oncenawhile: Thanks for reviewing this. The QPQ is complete, and I'll update you on the last item hopefully today. Cheers, Al Ameer (talk) 19:27, 14 October 2022 (UTC)

@Onceinawhile: Finished the citations. Al Ameer (talk) 02:11, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

@Onceinawhile: have the issues been resolved? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 09:55, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

Good to go. Thanks to Al Ameer for another top quality article. Onceinawhile (talk) 22:14, 1 November 2022 (UTC)