Template:Did you know nominations/Palacio de la Legislatura de la Ciudad de Buenos Aires
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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 11:03, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
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Palacio de la Legislatura de la Ciudad de Buenos Aires edit
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that following right to vote given to women in 1947, and their entry into the legislative system, the First Lady, Evita, established the Pink Room (pictured) and the Eva Perón Foundation in the palace?
Created by Rosiestep (talk), Bonkers The Clown (talk), and Nvvchar (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 03:35, 22 May 2013 (UTC).
Created and nominated in time. Hook 1 doesn't make sense, may requre a re-write, but ALT1 seems fine. Insufficient citations - the minimum required is one per paragraph. Earwig reveals no copyvio. What's a "carillon"? Needs to be explained. "It is an impressive architectural landmark" sounds a bit weaselly, I would prefer it if the was a cite directly support that clause. Both pictures are freely licensed, but the "pink room" doesn't appear to be the correct photo, it is the Salon d'Perón not the Salon d'Rosado.--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 15:02, 31 May 2013 (UTC)
- A shorter hook for consideration: ALT1: ... that the Palace of the Buenos Aires City Legislature (pictured) has a library which is clad with walnut? ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 12:54, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
- I revised the article text upon which the original hook was based. (It was sourced to an English-language document. The garbled wording leads me to think that the source may have been translated into Spanish, then retranslated back into English.) I suggest the following revised wording for the original hook:
- ALT2 ... that Eva Perón established the Salon Rosado in the Palace of the Buenos Aires City Legislature as an exclusive space for women politicians, where they could discuss issues without men being present? --Orlady (talk) 02:34, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
- ALT2 seems fine, but my previous concerns have not been adressed.--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 08:38, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
- There are now citations in each paragraph. Carillon now has a wl. The weaselly word "impressive" has been removed. The Salon d'Rosado was renamed the Salon d'Perón per the NY Times ref; I consolidated the paragraphs regarding this room. --Rosiestep (talk) 02:16, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
Good to go. --Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 15:32, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
