Template:Did you know nominations/Lago di Bientina

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The result was: promoted by Ganesha811 (talk) 20:17, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

Lago di Bientina edit

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... that Lago di Bientina was the largest lake in Tuscany before the beginning of a 300-year effort to drain it? Integrated Land and Water Resources Management in History: Proceedings of the Special Session on History, May 16th, 2005, ISBN 9783833424632

5x expanded by Ganesha811 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:29, 16 May 2018 (UTC).

Readable prose expanded, long enough, timely submitted, all but 1 paragraph have a citation, references properly formatted. Does not seem to need a QPQ. Do not see hook except in lead - no inline citation but otherwise fine.Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 15:01, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm new to this - thanks for the comments. What specifically should be changed to improve the nomination? I'm not sure I fully understood your critique. Appreciate the help! Ganesha811 (talk) 04:30, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

One two sentence paragraph without in-line citation. Hook now has inline citation which is both offline and in a foreign language so AGF.Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 15:01, 18 May 2018 (UTC)