Template:Did you know nominations/Edward Iacobucci

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:33, 2 October 2016 (UTC)

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Edward Iacobucci

~~... that Edward Iacobucci (pictured), dean of the University of Toronto Faculty of Law, is the son of Frank Iacobucci, a former puisne justice of the Supreme Court of Canada?~~

ALT1:~~... that Edward Iacobucci (pictured), started his term as dean of the University of Toronto Faculty of Law on January 1, 2015?~~
Comment: Image not necessary, but it is free.

Moved to mainspace by Patar knight (talk). Self-nominated at 15:00, 8 September 2016 (UTC).

ALT1 is classic example of a hook failing the "interesting" test. E Eng 07:06, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:59, 25 September 2016 (UTC)

This article is new enough and long enough. It is neutral and appears not to contain close paraphrasing and the image is appropriately licensed. However, the hook facts are supported in the article by a source that does not even mention his father as far as I can see. Assuming you can find a more suitable source, can I suggest ALT2

ALT2: ... that Edward Iacobucci (pictured) has followed in his father's footsteps as dean of the University of Toronto Faculty of Law? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:20, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

Much better, IMO. E Eng 06:21, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

Fixed the sourcing. Would like to see Frank Iacobucci in the hook, so maybe:

ALT3: ... that Edward Iacobucci (pictured) has followed in his father Frank Iacobucci's footsteps as dean of the University of Toronto Faculty of Law?

would work? ---- Patar knight - ^chat/_{contributions} 03:40, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

Even better, I think. E Eng 05:14, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

ALT4 (a combination of 2 & 3): ... that Edward Iacobucci (pictured) has followed in his father's footsteps as dean of the University of Toronto Faculty of Law?

for the hooks left, following the review above, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:26, 29 September 2016 (UTC)