Talk:Youth in Cambodia

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Latresagayden in topic Adding Content and Source

Adding Content and Source

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I think this is a good jumping off point for this topic, but it will probably need a lot more sources in order to be able to be a 'high' level of article. I think it needs to gather information from a variety of sources, instead of the one it has currently. There should be more information about effects on your following the Khmer Rouge through today. AshleyMichelleThompson (talk) 17:40, 22 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

Recent Edits

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User:AshleyMichelleThompson, your edits add good new information, but they contain sentence fragments and an unclear "they" pronoun. A good start - keep working. We will discuss in class as well. Prof.Vandegrift (talk) 05:41, 13 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Article evaluation

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I think the article needs to be updated with current stats on youth to reflect current information and events. The article do not talk about youth culture in Cambodia or the current economy as well as current living conditions. I do like that education is discussed however, the article do not talk must about the school system and their current practices. For example, are the schools public education that the state pays for or do families pay for schooling out of pocket? The outcome of the students that can not afford school is not discussed for the present day. Overall, this article need some work but it was very interesting to read.--Latresagayden (talk) 05:57, 6 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

Renaming article

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I'm thinking that this article should be renamed to Youth in Cambodia. I don't believe the scope of the article would need to change. It would bring the article in line with the naming conventions at Category:Youth by country. Gobōnobō + c 19:09, 16 March 2013 (UTC)Reply