Talk:Young v. Facebook, Inc.

Latest comment: 1 year ago by PrimeBOT in topic Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment


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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 16:47, 31 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • After reading the WP:LEAD and Facts section, I am impressed. However, subsequent sections seem to be sparse. I will probably have some requests for further detail. I think one section should be devoted to each of the six causes of action. I am not a legal scholar and think that the average person will get lost if you name 6 actions and have 4 sections describing them.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:11, 1 June 2012 (UTC)Reply
    • After considering this article, I think it fails for lack of breadth. I would expect that each action has a section at least as substantive as the facts section. Then the two court rulings should have large sections. This article is terribly incomplete.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:40, 1 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

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  This article is the subject of an educational assignment at University of California, Berkeley supported by WikiProject Cyberlaw and the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2012 Q1 term. Further details are available on the course page.

The above message was substituted from {{WAP assignment}} by PrimeBOT (talk) on 16:50, 2 January 2023 (UTC)Reply