Talk:Widerøe Flight 710

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Prisoner of Zenda in topic Aftermath
Good articleWiderøe Flight 710 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 12, 2013Good article nomineeListed
On this day...A fact from this article was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on May 6, 2022.

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:51, 3 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Lead
  • Lead looks very well. No issues here.
Flight
  • "He had a total flight time of 6,458, of which 85 hours was" --> "He had a total flight time of 6,458 hours, of which 85 were"
  • "The aircraft had during the morning of 6 May been used" Why not put "been used" before "during the morning"?
  • "which is received permission to" which is? You can remove "permission to" to avoid breaking the sentence.
  • "The first first point on the checklist"...
  • "Three second later" Seconds
Cause
  • Nothing here
Salvage
  • Good
Aftermath
  • Nothing here

Aftermath

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The final sentence is "The roll-out ... is scheduled for completion in 2013." Can this be updated? Prisoner of Zenda (talk) 06:28, 6 May 2022 (UTC)Reply