Talk:West Midlands CARE Team

Latest comment: 1 year ago by TheMouseMen

I declare my interest as a member of this team, but have tried to write an article with as little bias as possible Jpj157 (talk) 14:15, 5 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

Do you have any good sources for updating this pages contents? TheMouseMen (talk) 21:10, 10 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Ready for move to article space?

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Do others think this article is ready for a move to the public article space? Thanks Jpj157 (talk) 14:39, 5 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

Hi Jpj157, after reading the article, I don't think it fully meets Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. If you want to improve that, there is a tutorial to help you do so. LegoKontribsTalkM 14:56, 5 October 2012 (UTC)Reply
Have made a few edits to try and make things less sensational-sounding and more neutral. Any thoughts please? Jpj157 (talk) 15:25, 5 October 2012 (UTC)Reply
Looks much better. To submit it for approval, you can add {{subst:submit}} to the top of the page and it will be marked for review. LegoKontribsTalkM 15:42, 5 October 2012 (UTC)Reply