Talk:USS Vestal
Latest comment: 8 months ago by 2601:600:9200:CC0:58A4:7E87:AF64:6583 in topic Tone of article.
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Tone of article. edit
The tone has the flavor of a Public Relations piece where subjective descriptions of crew activities appear lacking in objectivity. This article should be re-edited to affect the tone of a proper historical treatment deleting superlatives regarding crew performance, etc. 2601:600:9200:CC0:58A4:7E87:AF64:6583 (talk) 23:42, 30 August 2023 (UTC)