Talk:Typhoon Phyllis (1975)
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Typhoon Phyllis (1975) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 7, 2017. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 00:10, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
- "During the first couple weeks of August 1975," - Well no, there are only 4 total weeks in a month. :P
- " In the 24-hours after being designated a typhoon" - No hyphen necessary. Same for the instance later in the paragraph.
- "aircraft data measured a minimum barometric pressure of 920 mbar (27 inHg)" - 27 inHg ranges from 920mb to 950mb. 920mb is more specifically 27.17 inHg.
- "The agency continued to track the system until August 20 when it was meandering over the Sea of Japan.[6][nb 1]" - Notes before refs.
- "A minimum pressure of 970 mbar (29 inHg) was recorded on Shimizu." - More specific inHg pls
- "Nearby, on, winds of 143 km/h (89 mph) were observed." - What?
- "with over 76 mm (3 in) of rainfall fall in an hour in parts of Kochi Prefecture." - No
- " It also contributed to a heat wave that claimed 25 lives." - How?
That's all. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 00:10, 7 August 2017 (UTC)