Talk:Tropical Storm Ewiniar (2018)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by KN2731 in topic GA Review

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JMA best track
66666 1804  035 0005 1804 0 6              EWINIAR              20180718
18060218 002 2 142 1120 1004     000                                    
18060300 002 2 145 1116 1002     000                                    
18060306 002 2 149 1113 1002     000                                    
18060312 002 2 152 1110 1002     000                                    
18060318 002 2 154 1109 1002     000                                    
18060400 002 2 156 1107 1002     000                                    
18060406 002 2 158 1106 1002     000                                    
18060412 002 2 162 1107 1002     000                                    
18060418 002 2 168 1111 1000     000                                    
18060500 002 3 175 1114 1000     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060506 002 3 185 1115 1000     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060512 002 3 197 1114 1000     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060518 002 3 205 1110 1000     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060600 002 3 207 1107 1000     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060606 002 3 201 1104  998     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060612 002 3 202 1110  998     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060618 002 3 204 1113  998     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060700 002 3 207 1113  998     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060706 002 3 210 1114  998     040     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060712 002 3 214 1117  998     040     00000 0000 90120 0120          
18060718 002 3 219 1119  998     040     00000 0000 90120 0120          
18060800 002 3 225 1121  998     040     00000 0000 90120 0120          
18060806 002 3 230 1123  998     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060812 002 3 233 1126  998     035     00000 0000 90060 0060          
18060818 002 2 231 1133  998     000                                    
18060900 002 2 229 1139  998     000                                    
18060906 002 2 230 1144  998     000                                    
18060912 002 2 230 1146  998     000                                    
18060918 002 2 228 1153  998     000                                    
18061000 002 2 227 1164 1000     000                                    
18061006 002 2 231 1186  998     000                                    
18061012 002 2 234 1218 1000     000                                    
18061018 002 2 239 1228  998     000                                    
18061100 002 2 246 1237  998     000                                    
18061106 002 2 249 1253  998     000                                    
JTWC best track
WP, 05, 2018060206,   , BEST,   0, 123N, 1126E,  20, 1007, DB,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1007,  165,  60,   0,   0,    ,   0,    ,   0,   0,     INVEST,  ,  0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, TRANSITIONED, wpC92018 to wp052018, 
WP, 05, 2018060212,   , BEST,   0, 126N, 1114E,  25, 1005, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1007,  165,  60,  35,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060218,   , BEST,   0, 132N, 1110E,  25, 1005, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1007,  170,  55,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060300,   , BEST,   0, 138N, 1108E,  25, 1004, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1006,  175,  55,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060306,   , BEST,   0, 148N, 1105E,  25, 1003, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1005,  175,  55,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060312,   , BEST,   0, 151N, 1105E,  25, 1004, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1005,  160,  55,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060318,   , BEST,   0, 154N, 1104E,  25, 1003, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1006,  160,  55,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060400,   , BEST,   0, 156N, 1102E,  25, 1003, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1006,  160,  50,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060406,   , BEST,   0, 158N, 1104E,  25, 1001, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1004,  150,  50,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060412,   , BEST,   0, 161N, 1109E,  25, 1001, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1004,  150,  50,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060418,   , BEST,   0, 167N, 1113E,  25, 1001, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1006,  200,  50,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060500,   , BEST,   0, 175N, 1114E,  30, 1000, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1008,  250,  40,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060506,   , BEST,   0, 186N, 1115E,  30, 1000, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1004,  225,  40,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060512,   , BEST,   0, 199N, 1114E,  30, 1000, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1004,  225,  40,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060518,   , BEST,   0, 204N, 1109E,  35, 1000, TS,  34, NEQ,   50,    0,    0,   40, 1008,  275,  30,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060600,   , BEST,   0, 202N, 1104E,  35, 1000, TS,  34, NEQ,   50,   20,   30,   35, 1004,  165,  30,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,       FIVE, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060606,   , BEST,   0, 202N, 1102E,  35,  999, TS,  34, NEQ,   95,   55,   40,   45, 1003,  155,  30,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060612,   , BEST,   0, 203N, 1106E,  30,  997, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1000,  155,  30,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060618,   , BEST,   0, 204N, 1108E,  30,  997, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1000,  155,  30,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060700,   , BEST,   0, 206N, 1111E,  35,  996, TS,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1004,  165,  20,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060706,   , BEST,   0, 210N, 1116E,  40,  996, TS,  34, NEQ,   30,   40,   25,   25, 1003,  150,  30,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060712,   , BEST,   0, 216N, 1121E,  40,  996, TS,  34, NEQ,   25,   30,    0,    0, 1002,  150,  30,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060718,   , BEST,   0, 222N, 1122E,  35,  996, TS,  34, NEQ,   35,   50,    0,   30, 1002,  150,  25,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060800,   , BEST,   0, 227N, 1123E,  30, 1000, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1002,  130,  35,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060806,   , BEST,   0, 231N, 1124E,  25, 1004, TD,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1002,  140,  45,   0,   0,   W,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR, S, 
WP, 05, 2018060812,   , BEST,   0, 233N, 1125E,  20, 1007, DB,   0,    ,    0,    0,    0,    0, 1002,  140,  45,   0,   0,    ,   0,    ,   0,   0,    EWINIAR,  , 

KN2731 {talk · contribs} 13:41, 1 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tropical Storm Ewiniar (2018)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC)Reply


Will do the last one tonight. NoahTalk 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • then over northern Hainan replace the bolded with "and later"
  • and reach peak intensity. You should mention what the peak was.
  • ships were forced to take shelter Were they just docked? Something else?
  • Xuwen, Guangdong and Haikou, Hainan and Yangjiang, Guangdong Add commas after the second part of the location name.
  • 30 cm (12 in) Change cm measurement to 305 mm.
  • A total of 404 ships took shelter in the Port of Zhanjiang. Same thing here.. I assume they just docked.
    • Source gives "anchored in safe areas" - that should be correct. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Ewiniar also spawned a tornado in Dali Is there an EF rating?
  • Longgang District, Shenzhen Comma after the second part of the location name.
That should be it. NoahTalk 23:07, 5 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Hurricane Noah: done, thanks for the review. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)Reply