Talk:Tropical Storm Ewiniar (2018)/GA1
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
Will do the last one tonight. NoahTalk 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
then over northern Hainan
replace the bolded with "and later"and reach peak intensity.
You should mention what the peak was.ships were forced to take shelter
Were they just docked? Something else?Xuwen, Guangdong
andHaikou, Hainan
andYangjiang, Guangdong
Add commas after the second part of the location name.30 cm (12 in)
Change cm measurement to 305 mm.A total of 404 ships took shelter in the Port of Zhanjiang.
Same thing here.. I assume they just docked.Ewiniar also spawned a tornado in Dali
Is there an EF rating?Longgang District, Shenzhen
Comma after the second part of the location name.