Talk:Triton Showers

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Ritchie333 in topic Neutral tone

Neutral tone

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The statement "the UK's leading electric shower manufacturer' is rather point of view and unencyclopedic, it looks like it came from them, rather than a secondary source? Theroadislong (talk) 15:43, 27 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

The problem with these classes of articles is they don't really fit into the usual "find multiple news, books and magazine sources" and cite them format. There's also this source which says "The Great British shower company, Triton showers are manufactured in the UK. Many installers and homeowners swear by Triton and believe a bathroom isn’t complete without one; this shows just how much of an impact this British company has had on the bathrooms throughout the UK." which suggests what we currently have is about right. They aren't some dodgy fly-by-night rip-off company. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 15:51, 27 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
I'm not remotely suggesting that they are "dodgy fly-by-night rip-off company" but to say they are "the UK's leading electric shower manufacturer" in Wikipedia's voice is not neutral tone. Theroadislong (talk) 15:55, 27 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
I suggest taking it up with Wales Online, who said it. Frankly I am happy to see a British business investing in apprenticeships, as decent plumbers are hard to find and it puts lie to the common post-Brexit complaint that all British jobs are being flushed down the soil pipe. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 16:00, 27 November 2017 (UTC)Reply