Think About It (Melanie C song) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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Write each individual songwriter, then say who produced the song
The track → "Think About It"
was released after the single "Rock Me" → You just said that that Think About It was the first single?
, prior to the release Melanie had spent time on the West-End Blood Brothers which she said helped her develop and evolve as an artist. → This should be a new sentence.
The song is a dance-pop song → Musically, "Think About It" draws influence from dance-pop
Link dance-pop
Melanie → Melanie C
a departure from the usual rock-stance Melanie had taken in her career since 1999 it gathered comparisons to artists; → Awful construction
lyrically the song discusses doing something that you know you shouldn't. → Should be a new sentence here
Critically the song gathered near acclaim, → Makes no sense at all
than the previous → previous what?
to her fifth studio album The Sea → We already know it's her fifth studio album
Commercially the song was a moderate hit → Reword
A music video directed Howard Greenhalgh showed her perform against different backdrops and in different outfits throughout. → Again, poor wording
There are numerous issues in the other sections, poor phrasing and grammar (For example: A music video for "Think About It" was released, directed by Howard Greenhalgh, her official website described it saying it "provides the song with a varied canvas – bursts of vivid colour and imagery – that's if you can try and take your eyes off Melanie in a selection of stunning outfits!") Pictures have poor captions. One of the references has a double quotation mark in it, plus there are wrong/missing work and publisher parameters. Also cases of WP:OR in the article. A Credits and personnel section should also be added. Sorry, but I am failing as the article is under prepared with basic mistakes which should not be here. I think this article could become a GA, but it needs to be thoroughly copy edited. I suggest you list for a Peer Review or request a GOCE. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 01:16, 3 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
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