Talk:The Restoration (1910 film)

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Restoration (1910 film)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:18, 30 May 2015 (UTC)Reply


Don't worry, we'll get through these JAGUAR  19:18, 30 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

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Checking against GA criteria edit

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
    "Little is known of the production credits, but the film does feature Marie Eline as the little girl" - could be re-worded so Marie Eline is mentioned first
    Nothing on production in the lead?
    "The writer of the scenario is unknown, but it was most likely Lloyd Lonergan" - this needs a citation
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

The reception section is very well detailed, so this one should come to a pass like the rest. Well done JAGUAR  20:55, 2 June 2015 (UTC)Reply