Talk:The Mama Who Came to Dinner

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Mama Who Came to Dinner/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Soaper1234 (talk · contribs) 13:56, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Hello. I plan on reviewing this article. It is my first GA review, so do bear with me. Expect comments in the coming days. Soaper1234 - talk 13:56, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

You have responded to all your comments, so I am happy to give this article a pass. Well done! Soaper1234 - talk 14:11, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• All looks fine to me.

Synopsis

• The plot section passes MOS:TVPLOT.

Production

• Do you have a source for the director, writers and producers?

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

• Clarify who Judy Winslow is as she has not been mentioned anywhere so far.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• Are the years for the different shows necessary?

 Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

• Unlink Family Matters

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove "("What a Wonderful World" by Louis Armstrong)" - second mention of theme song so no need to clarify.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

• "and to turn off their TVs after the song concluded" → "and then turn their television off".

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

References

• Change |author= in references to |first= |last=.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Reference #4 still needs changing. This can be done using |first1= |last1= |first2= |last2=. Soaper1234 - talk 10:10, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

@Soaper1234: The issue has been fixed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:28, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Notes

• @Soaper1234: All  Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)