Talk:The Book of Why

Latest comment: 3 years ago by AngusWOOF in topic Condense the summary

Condense the summary edit

Can the summary be rewritten without the subsections, so it's more like a paragraph per chapter. Compare with Outliers (book). AngusW🐶🐶F (barksniff) 16:07, 21 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Hi, thanks for reviewing the article. What would be the purpose of removing the subsections? The subsections are there to make the article easier to read. Cheers, Alfredsph (talk) 10:16, 22 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
Alfredsph, it's excessive sectioning. Unless the chapters are themselves individual essays for an anthology, they don't need to be highlighted like that. AngusW🐶🐶F (barksniff) 20:56, 22 February 2021 (UTC)Reply