Talk:The Beguiling

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Khazar2 in topic GA Review

Move to Mirvish Village edit

This article is misleading re when the store moved to Mirvish Village. It was already located in the two-storey there as early as the fall of 1996 (I know, because I began shopping there regularly my first year of university there), before it was sold to its subsequent owners. I couldn't tell you what date the move was.

I'd be happy to edit it so that the timeline was clear, but without a citation, I'm not going to just make stuff up. As written, it doesn't actually say that it moved after being sold---it's ambiguous, as are the sources I can find. A reference with the move date would be most helpful. CüRlyTüRkeyTalkContribs 02:28, 16 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Beguiling/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 12:02, 6 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

I'll be glad to take this one, Curly--sorry you've had to wait so long for a review on it. Comments to follow in a minute. -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:02, 6 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

Okay, this looks solid and essentially ready to pass. I've made some tweaks as I went; feel free to revert any with which you disagree and we can discuss. Only two points I see that need attention:

  • "and by Drawn and Quarterly." this probably needs citation.
  • "and the Joe Shuster Awards' Harry Kremer Retailer Award in 2010" --it doesn't look like this second one was also shared; this should probably be clarified.

Thanks for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:18, 6 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

That'll do it, then. All other criteria checked and satisfactory; thanks for another quality contribution. -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:05, 8 October 2013 (UTC)Reply